I continue to enjoy this story. It is well structured, well written, carefully plotted, and seems to be building to an exciting dramatic conclusion. I will confess, however, to growing a bit tired of the games between Ginny and Harry. The memory vaults were a nice twist, perhaps even compelling, but you've even written about how this latest snagging session removed all doubts about how each feels about the other. So, absent the fear of rejection and beyond the point of worry about how expressing one's feelings could possibly negatively affect their relationship ... What, pray tell, necessitates a second deposit to the memory vaults? Is the romance the primary plot device? I'm sorry to complain, and I still find the story well worth reading, but this plot device is most frustrating and very difficult to accept.

Author's Response: Even though, I've read you next review, I still want to talk about this. Thank you SO much for bringing this up. I wrestled with myself over their continuing to put memories in their vaults, because for other reasons I wanted them to keep their memories apart for a while longer. Ultimately, I came to the conclusion that Ginny was afraid of unrequited love, again, and Harry simply didn't want to deal with his feelings for various reasons. And each of these feelings will be discussed more in the future. Even if I had reasons, though, I feared making readers feel the same thing you did. If you EVER feel that way about some of my plotting again, please do tell. Sometimes I don't even realize when my characters are acting out of character or extra stupidly until I reread what I write some time later. So than you! I need these kinds of reviews!

Her ions is right the duo needs to stop and talk to each other and dump there respective partners......kutgw

Author's Response: Whatever will we do with them? Thanks for the review, as always! You're great.