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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2014.10.03 - 05:08PM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
Will the fact that the kids have seen harry and ginny together make the penny drop at some point? I do worry that jay might see ginny with his dad and distrust her as he's seen her with "another man" and that could cause all sorts of problems if the truth isn't revealed sooner!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.14 - 01:19AM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
I really liked the way Harry explained his life and battle against Voldemort.
The kiss down by the lake was great. It may be hard for Ginny to explain to Abby without telling her the whole truth.
Can't wait for the discussion during summer break.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.07.12 - 11:36AM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
Very nicely done, although them seeing Ginny and Harry kissing is going to put the fat in the fire a bit :)
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.07.12 - 11:04AM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
Good chapter. I really wish He'd told Jay who he was though. I can see hard times ahead for father and son. I hope I'm wrong.
Tricia
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.07.11 - 09:00PM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
Good chapter. Harry really has created his own problem here with his not telliing James anything earlier. Poor Abby thinking that Ginny doesn't like Henry when she realizes how much she likes Harry.
Harry discouraging Hermione from visiting Ginny was very amusing. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2014.07.11 - 07:39PM Title: Chapter 16 March 3
The strawberries went furry - how long were they in bed?! The lake scene was great. I am curious if you will cover Draco's thoughts on Harry's reappearance.
Author's Response: As long as it takes strawberries to go furry!! Harry and Draco have a bit of a conversation but their kids are their main concern there. May add in a latr chapter, I am only writing a couple of chapters ahead, although there's not many left. Thanks for reading
