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Reviewer: pottermania Signed
Date: 2016.03.28 - 06:38PM
Title: Chapter 15
I giggled at Harry's comment: "This is just about the weirdest thing I’ve ever had happen,”
“And I’ve led an exceptionally strange life.”
Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed
Date: 2014.10.17 - 02:21PM
Title: Chapter 15
This chapter is great as usual, but the more fluffy it gets, the more I feel like the big crash is imminent.
Author's Response: I could lie and tell you that you're wrong but I just can't.
Reviewer: Auchhior Signed
Date: 2014.10.16 - 10:11AM
Title: Chapter 15
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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2014.10.15 - 08:29AM
Title: Chapter 15
Loved this chapter.
I hope Harry lets his Slytherin side out with his dealings with Skeeter. I'm guessing that he will need it.
Love the George and Ginny banter. Typical big brother/little sister conversation.
The last part of this chapter just shows that the most loving relationship needs intimatacy. It's like only having 3/4 of a whole.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think for a lot of couples intimacy is missing and for some that works, but for others it makes everything feel flat. I didn't start out that way, but I think the idea was running around in my head and it came out really well, showing exactly what I was feeling.
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed
Date: 2014.10.14 - 12:02PM
Title: Chapter 15
A pact with the devil huh? We do know from OoP that Rita can be trusted only to act in her own self interest, so Harry should be OK here.
Sweet conversation between George and Ginny. There is a typo you might want to fix. When George asks why Ginny wants pay she says to buy "more" rich husbands, did you mean 'me'?
So sex is required for their bond? There is a truth here. We know babies must have physical contact to develop properly, in fact they will die without it. Makes sense that the physical intimacy of the sex act strengthens the bond between the man and woman.
Author's Response: I actually meant more. Does it sound really weird?
I think that, in this case, it would strengthen them. I know not everyone is drawn to sex, but it's important in a lot of marriages.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2014.10.13 - 09:15PM
Title: Chapter 15
I do not know whether to laugh or cry about this sex bond thing. Oh my word..... you and your imagination.
Author's Response: I typically choose laughing, but that's just me. ;)
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed
Date: 2014.10.13 - 01:26PM
Title: Chapter 15
God one. Thanks
Tricia
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it
Reviewer: mwinter Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 11:14PM
Title: Chapter 15
Awaiting more.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: Marinka Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 08:07PM
Title: Chapter 15
You just love making it more and more complicated for them?:) A magical aliment on top of the pregnancy related one, poor Ginny and Harry, the way things are i just hope that they will survive the whole experience.
But teasing aside, any progress on the witch/wizard who did it? Are we going to get an update from the MLE?
Author's Response: One could argue that making it easy for them wouldn't be as interesting.
The MLE still has no solid leads and nothing to go on, but the next chapter will discuss it more. No answers, but another clue will surface.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 03:49PM
Title: Chapter 15
Something's tells me that they may need to get it on a few more times before the baby arrives....kutgw
Author's Response: We'll definitely see... :)
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 03:42PM
Title: Chapter 15
oh, fantastic chapter! I loved Ginny and George - we didn't get nearly enough of them in the books
and talk about surreal at the end for Harry and Ginny, lol!
good luck with the original, I'll be looking forward to reading it when it's out! :)
Author's Response: I think I would have loved the dynamic of Ginny and the twins. It has always fascinated me and I wish we'd had more. My beta, James, loved the line in this chapter about it being the weirdest thing Harry had ever had happen.
Thank you, I'm excited! It's interesting and challenging coming up with something on my own, but fanfic has been a nice testing ground. I never thought I'd write an original but I'm glad I decided to give it a go.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 01:41PM
Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2014.10.12 - 01:31PM
Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I liked the sibling relationship between George and Ginny - very sweet. I like the way he's trying so hard. Poor Harry - I can only imagine what the gossips will make of him showing up with Luna. Interesting arrangement with Rita. I hope it works out to his advantage or at least not to his disadvantage. Congrats on the original book! Hope it all works out well for you.
Author's Response: I wish we'd seen more between Ginny and the twins in canon. I bet it would have been really funny.
No real fall out from him being with Luna. I think only Rita would make that one try to stretch and she needs to be on Harry's good side so she'll leave it alone.
I'm excited about the original. I wasn't sure how it was going to go, but I'm really getting in to it :)
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