Reviews For Christmas with the Potters
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.08.01 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
This actually made me a bit sad because I wish all famillys could be this close and happy.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.08.01 - 10:35AM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 11:15PM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
If ever someone needed acceptance and understanding, I'm glad Al found it in his father first and then the rest of his family. I'm not so sure Draco and Astoria will be quite so understanding for several reasons. First, Scorpius is the last of the Malfoy bloodline. Second, the Malfoys as a family have always been prejudiced against anyone who wasn't of pure-blood stock and third, while Draco might be a bit more open-minded than Lucius, he is very much a product of his upbringing. I'm hoping you have a sequel in mind involving the Al/Scorpius partnership.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 09:24PM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
Loved it. I wondered if Scorpius was with Al.. Cute. Nice job a nice slice of the Potter's life.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 04:32PM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
A happy family holiday story. I have to laugh thinking about how Ron will react, though, when he finds out about his children.
Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 04:09PM Title: Chapter 3 Christmas Eve
Reviewer: ILoveHarryAndGinny Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 01:54PM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
I love the way all of your short stories and one shots fit together in the same universe, but each is still its own different story. I'm still enjoying your writing, both short and long and I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.07.31 - 12:45AM Title: Chapter 2 Confidences
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.07.29 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 2 Confidences
Good chapter - not too heavy. So, more than one shock for Harry this Christmas and changes for the future. He didn't make it easy for Al, even with time to think, but its clear he'll support Al's choices as long as his son is happy.
Reviewer: ILoveHarryAndGinny Signed Date: 2014.07.29 - 04:35PM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
Wow. That was confusing. First time I read this, I was pretty sure James was saying to Harry he wanted to ask Al to marry him, not Ali. I thought he was jokng then I read the entire thing again and it all made sense. More please!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.07.28 - 02:27PM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
Interesting beginning. Harry is going to have the chance to do some parenting. I wonder if Ginny already knew. And who else knew as well. Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.07.28 - 01:32PM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
Interesting set up for your story, with Al finding his place in the Ministry. I'm assuming from his reaction, though, that Harry didn't know Al was gay? I look forward to seeing how the Potters deal with that little surprise.
Reviewer: ILoveHarryAndGinny Signed Date: 2014.07.28 - 11:14AM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
Well... Al seems to be taking after his namesake, both by being gay and by being lined up to be minister for magic. Can't wait for the next chapter to be validated!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.07.28 - 03:13AM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
I'm not sure how well I like Al's lifestyle preference, but it sounds as if he's thought long and hard about who he is, what his strengths and weaknesses are, how he could best serve the Wizarding world and why he should have a job under Kingsley. It will be interesting to see what he has to say to Harry and how Harry finally comes to terms with his son's ultimate career choice.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.07.27 - 08:00PM Title: Chapter 1 Christmas Eve Eve
Oooo I like it..