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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.08.07 - 01:20AM Title: The Sleepless Halloween

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This story is terrific, a missing moment that could very well have happened while Harry, Ron and Hermione were traipsing about the countryside and Ginny and Neville were stuck at Hogwarts. The theme of supportive friendship really shines through in the way they comfort and tease each other and truly listen when quiet attention is called for. You've done a marvelous job with this story.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.08.06 - 11:37AM Title: The Sleepless Halloween

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Good dialogue and a good sort of interlude piece. Well done.



Reviewer: isallebe Signed Date: 2014.08.06 - 03:10AM Title: The Sleepless Halloween

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.08.05 - 08:46PM Title: The Sleepless Halloween

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Nice idea. I've always thought Ginny and Neville became good friends during that year. I never had the impression that Boggarts would talk and torment people so that part didn't really work for me. I can see Ginny's Boggart being the diary and Neville's still being Snape. I like the conversation between Neville and Ginny, but sorry I can't stand Neville and Luna - I really can't see them together. I think he's too conventional and she's too unconventional to ever work together.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The Boggart part was a bit odd for me to write. I didn't intend for them to talk; if I put that in there, I think it'd be a mistake on my part. The tormenting part of the Boggart comes from my impressions of Mrs. Weasley's Boggart in OoTP, where her Boggart ends up making her cry and unable to finish it off. It also comes from Lupin's comment in PoA about Boggarts being easier to fight with a group of people. Yeah, I get what you mean about Neville and Luna. I don't exactly see them together and the reasoning is similar to yours. For me, I think I just ended up liking the idea of them getting together for a short time sometime post-DH and splitting up soon after. And again, thanks for the review. I haven't really written too much fanfiction before, so definitely appreciate them.




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