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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 06:34AM Title: Chapter 6

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Wow, Mr. Potter becomes more and more team-minded, and nosier in regard of Auror Weasleys private life.
Well, I suppose the exchange of the horcrux stories will be a kind of an ice breaker. I just wanted to change to Potters first name in my reviews when Ginny did it, lol.

Just when I thought that Harry would invite Ginny for dinner this evening he left...for Malfoy Manor? In the meanwhile I think that Harry Potter masquerade is a red herring to divert the investigations. We will see...



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.09.27 - 01:02AM Title: Chapter 6

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The bonding moment between Harry and Ginny went very well and I hope there will be others in future chapters. Lucius Malfoy is a very slippery fish, to be certain. However, unlike Harry, I agree with Ginny that there isn't much to prove that he had anything to do with the two murders. They need more evidence than just the dead bodies and whatever forensics Hermione comes up with. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks! Harry's suspicions that this point are not very heavily based on reality, more so on his longstanding hatred of Malfoy. While Ginny may feel the same way, she needs to act professionally in this situation.



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.09.05 - 12:17PM Title: Chapter 6

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Interesting. Giving us a little bit of Ginny's years at Hogwarts. And a connection between Harry and Ginny Nice. Of course Harry is up to something, wonder if it's legal? Look forward to the next chapter, waiting for validation.
Tricia

Author's Response: Thanks! It's about time that these two work on their relationship, no? And Harry's idea will teeter on the edge of legality, but I hope that everyone will like what is in store. Hopefully validation will not take too long; I just put it up today when I realized that it has been a while since the last chapter: classes starting has thrown me off!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.09.03 - 10:48AM Title: Chapter 6

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Interesting chapter. Some clues to the murdere and some opening up between Harry and Ginny.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Everything is coming along now, and there will be even more revealed (in both parts) in the next chapter, which will hopefully be up soon.



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.09.02 - 05:01AM Title: Chapter 6

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Malfoy in Hogs Head is suspicious on its own, I can't see him patronising place like that.

Author's Response: Thanks! Everyone seems to be thinking the same thing about Malfoy, but I guarantee there are reasons for everything. Just to be sure, I added a bit into one of the later chapters explaining something because of everyone's interest in Malfoy at the Hog's Head.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.09.01 - 04:44PM Title: Chapter 6

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Did anyone ask Aberforth if Lucius had ever been in the Hog's Head before?

Author's Response: No, they didn't ask. But the Aurors are trying not to investigate Malfoy unless they have a more concrete reason to do so. They can't accuse him of murder because he was in a pub that is a little out of character for him unless there is some evidence linking him to the crime. But don't worry, they aren't done with Malfoy yet.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.09.01 - 12:03PM Title: Chapter 6

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Really good chapter, nice to see Ginny and Harry open up to each other andgetting along.
I look forward to the next installment :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Their relationship is starting to come along, and I think that you will like what is coming soon. The next chapter is on its way!



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2014.09.01 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter 6

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Some intriguing developments here, and I'm not even talking about the investigation or the back-story!


I hope I'm not stealing the thunder of anyone on the Auror team, but the mere fact that Lucius Malfoy was at the Hog's Head is extremely suspicious, wouldn't one think? The place is a dive, and Luscious Lucius doesn't frequent dives.



Author's Response: Thanks! The Hog's Head is a dive, but keep in mind that it is a good place to go if you don't want to be seen and if you don't want anyone asking questions... that opens up a lot of possibilities. The Auror team wants to watch themselves, because in this world, Lucius Malfoy still has a certain amount of power and influence within the Ministry. It might just be up to Harry to come up with a solution.



Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2014.09.01 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 6

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good chapter, with them revealing their pasts to each other. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.




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