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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.05.17 - 07:42AM Title: Chapter 9

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Great chapter. I loved it and had to smile about Harry's new jacket, lol.
There is nothing to complain about. Being a late reader, I can't even complain about the cliffie, lol.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.09.28 - 12:12AM Title: Chapter 9

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I love Molly's reaction to the Daily Prophet article and the fact that her daughter went to the Malfoy's party on the arm of such a distinguished escort. I must say that this isn't Rita's usually waspish gossip, and that the mild speculation is actually fun to read. It'll be interesting to see if Rita writes another, more scathing, article in a few days' time.

Oh, my! It seems the world has turned arse over teakettle for Seamus and Aaron. I do hope they're all right. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! The article was just your average gossip article, it could have been written by anyone, but I did not feel like coming up with another journalist. Maybe if I write another story I will be able to add in a more scathing Rita Skeeter article.



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2014.09.23 - 11:23AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2014.09.21 - 12:43PM Title: Chapter 9

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Loved the beginning with Mrs. Weasley's comments and Harry's comment. Great Cliff! Please hurry back with more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this chapter, the next one should be up soon!



Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.09.21 - 05:05AM Title: Chapter 9

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Wouldn't it be easier to have second person polijuced? It seems that they are jumping to conclusions about the twin. And why did the Rokwood waited all that time to kill witnesses?

Author's Response: Thanks! Had the other person been using polyjuice in the scene that Grover Appelwyth described, then nothing would make sense for how the current killer looks exactly like Rookwood. Don't forget, Augustus is definitely dead and (at least according to me) you can NOT use polyjuice from someone who has died. So this explanation does seem to answer all of their questions. And thank you for asking about why it took so long, I need to add a good explanation for that in the next chapter before I add it. If you have any more questions, I hope the next chapter will answer them all!



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 9

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Great chapter and nice cliffhanger. I am really enjoying this story and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't have any dramatic cliffhangers in this story, and I thought it was time for one. I hope you like the next chapter.



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 04:25PM Title: Chapter 9

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Couldn't have a classic whodunit without a 180 degree twist, could we?? I now find myself wondering whether this will resolve with a discarded lead or something completely unexpected. Awaiting the maestro's final cambiare!

Author's Response: Thanks! Naturally, we need to mess everything up before it can be resolved. I hope you like what is to come.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 02:49PM Title: Chapter 9

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Another good chapter. The aftermath of Harry and Ginny's date was funny (I laughed at Harry's new jacket). We learned something new about the case at the end, but why were Seamus and Aaron attacked? Can't wait for the next update to find out more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked that, although I cannot take full credit for the idea of Harry's jacket. That most likely belongs to a man named Andrew Marlowe. But anyway, I hope the next chapter clears up all of your questions.



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 01:39PM Title: Chapter 9

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OH no.. They aren't in deep dodo are they? Hope not. Your Seamus is much more likeable as an adult. And I like Aaron too. Not sure why they would want to pull Harry into this by making the victims look like him. Doesn't make much sense, unless they thought they could take him down together? Also if Harry killed Augustus in the war, how were there two of them in the alley? Color me slightly confused. Look forward to answers.
Tricia

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, this isn't a tragedy, and I don't have JKR's strength to crush people's hearts. Seamus is not very based on canon, rather his inspiration from the TV show that I mentioned in my original note, and Aaron comes from that world as well. Hopefully, they are both good blends of the two worlds. As for Rookwood, the scene that Grover Appelwyth witnessed with the two of them was before Augustus was killed, leaving only one of them left in present time. Hopefully the description that you get in the next chapter will clear things up. The victims are made to look like Harry because he is the ultimate target. I hope that helped, and wasn't even more confusing. :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 12:06PM Title: Chapter 9

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great chapter, looking forward to the next! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up soon!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 10:15AM Title: Chapter 9

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Good chapter. Identical twins...hmmm..interesting.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 06:19AM Title: Chapter 9

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Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 06:07AM Title: Chapter 9

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So I've been really enjoying this story, but I must have missed the original Author's Notes and had no idea this was slightly based on Castle until Harry put on the jacket that said Chosen One, and then I went back and found your note. Just hope Harry and Ginny aren't kept apart as long as Rick and Kate. Anyway, really loving this so far. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yay, another Castle fan! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I really wish that I had the creative talent to come up with enough stories to drag their relationship out like Rick and Kate's is (car going up in flames the minute before the wedding, anyone?) but unfortunately I don't, so these two will be happier much quicker than Caskett was. Besides, Ginny doesn't have quite so many walls as Kate did in the beginning, and Malfoy was sort of her Bracken, so that is already taken care of. I rambled a lot there, but thanks again!



Reviewer: Loveobsession Signed Date: 2014.09.20 - 05:49AM Title: Chapter 9

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Good chapter. Ill be sad when this story ends. Is there long to go?

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you will be sad (and I mean that in the best way possible) because that means that you like the story. Sorry, but there is only one more chapter and the short epilogue left.




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