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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.03.22 - 11:25PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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That was a good chapter filled with sorrow, love and a bit of pain. I'm glad the Weasleys accepted him back as fast as they did.
I would still like to know how Harry had lost his magic and whether Snidefish was involved with it??
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: All will be revealed in the coming chapters, although there is a long way to go. Another 11 chapters, in fact. Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.03.22 - 08:48PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

Harry will only get his magic and happiness when Ginny just tells hi she is his and they are together again......kutgw

Author's Response: Snidefish wasn't Harry's only problem, that's for sure. Thanks for your review!



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.03.22 - 01:54PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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Excellent reunion. Good balance between awkwardness, anger and delight all round.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I was a bit worried about getting the right balance of emotions in this chapter, and I ended up re-writing it a few times, so I'm glad you think I got it right! Thanks for your review.



Reviewer: Loveobsession Signed Date: 2015.03.22 - 05:17AM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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Delighted to see Harry re-united with the Weasleys and that all has been forgiven. Great chapter. I'm excited to see where you will go from here. Kutgw

Author's Response: Don't worry, there is a lot more to come! Thanks for your review!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.03.21 - 11:05PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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Marvelous chapter! Nice to see Harry back with his loving family again! Now if he can just get his magic and his Ginny back again!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Harry is much better off than he was, but there is still a lot more for him to figure it out and overcome. Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2015.03.21 - 02:41PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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That was perfect, the anger, sorrow and love. Hermione hitting Harry just like she did to Ron in Deathly Hallows made me laugh. How long will it take everyone to find out Harry can't do magic?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I have to admit I smile everytime I read the scene with Hermione hitting Harry, despite the emotion involved. Harry's secret gets revealed very early on. It's hard to hide the fact you can't do magic in a magical world. Thanks for your review.



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2015.03.21 - 12:48PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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Everything went well with the Weasleys. Hope this will help him with his magic. Of course there's Ginny. What will happen with her? I'm still curious about Ross, too. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Snidefish may be out of the way, but Harry still has a lot to get through. Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked it.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2015.03.21 - 12:22PM Title: Chapter 12: Explanations and Revelations

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Harry explaining everything to the Weasley's better then I thought it would, I did think the yelling would come from the Weasley's. I did wonder if Ginny was going tell Harry that she dating someone, but that will come out sooner or later. It's funny that Hermione hit Harry a few times, I thought that Ginny or Ron be the ones that will hit Harry.

I am sorry I made a small mistake in some my reviews, I did not member any part of the story that Weasleys and Hermione has doubt in that Harry left. I have a bad memory so normal I would reread the story from the 1st chapter, before I made any new review. But I did not have the time, for I have cancer and I was doing radiation therapy. Also I confused this story with another one,

Author's Response: Thanks for a lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm very sorry to hear about your cancer, I wish you the best of luck with your therapy and I hope you get a quick return to full health. Thanks again.




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