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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2015.01.25 - 11:14PM Title: Pain

Clearly, you're creating one of the truly great OCs in HP fanfiction in Maria (along with Sophie and Jackson in RHS)!

As thoroughly as I enjoyed Normalcy when you were posting that...these two sibling stories are truly magnificent, showing a significant new depth of storytelling. Totally unfair that you're not getting more recognition.

In any case, I hope that you are appreciating your increasing mastery in this arena.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.01.20 - 12:48AM Title: Pain

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An absolutely heart-wrenching chapter. Poor Harry, not knowing who he is or why he's in the condition he is or what those flashes of color are. I'm glad that he has Maria as a constant in his limited world and that she understands what he's going through. He's lucky to have her at his side.



Reviewer: MidnightDream Signed Date: 2014.11.12 - 01:15AM Title: Pain

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I just started reading your work and have become a fan. Your writing is amazing and beautifully done, the plot is equally good. Can't wait for an update!



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2014.10.10 - 10:54PM Title: Pain

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Another heroine emerges in this story!

Thank you...



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 08:28AM Title: Pain

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You are a very talented storyteller. I've not read TRH (yet!) except for a quick skim of the first chapter to get a rough idea of where this starts, but you've already managed to get me really keen to read more.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2014.10.06 - 07:23AM Title: Pain

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Painful to read.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.10.04 - 05:50PM Title: Pain

i hope to never be in the shape harry is in right now...then again i dont thinki want to be ginny either at the moment......kutgw



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2014.10.04 - 04:53PM Title: Pain

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Another powerful chapter. I wondered what he may have remembered afterward when I read Restless Heart Syndrome. Didn't Remus remember for a bit?




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