Reviews For Father of the Bride
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.10.18 - 02:07AM Title: Chapter 1 Cute story. The supportive relationship between Lily and her brothers was nice. The portrayal of Harry and Ginny's relationship was really nice - their love still being just as strong after 30 years of marriage was a great recurring theme. The importance of marriage was nicely shown as well. The early morning daddy-daughter flight was very sweet. The walking, talking eleven month old twins were a bit jarring and didn't really seem to fit. I actually double checked their age several times to make sure I'd read it right. Even for a three year old to supervise seems like they are super children. I never had the impression that magical children were super intelligent and far ahead of Muggles, but that was my only real quibble with the story. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.10.18 - 02:00AM Title: Chapter 1 Cute story. The supportive relationship between Lily and her brothers was nice. The portrayal of Harry and Ginny's relationship was really nice - their love still being just as strong after 30 years of marriage was a great recurring theme. The importance of marriage was nicely shown as well. The early morning daddy-daughter flight was very sweet. The walking, talking eleven month old twins were a bit jarring and didn't really seem to fit. I actually double checked their age several times to make sure I'd read it right. Even for a three year old to supervise seems like they are super children. I never had the impression that magical children were super intelligent and far ahead of Muggles, but that was my only real quibble with the story. Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.10.16 - 08:49PM Title: Chapter 1 Awww. That was lovely. I think you captured Harry beautifully, The conversations between Harry and his daughter were perfect. Ah. Would have loved to be at that wedding. Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.10.13 - 04:24PM Title: Chapter 1 Thanks for another slice of this universe. There's so much love around that it always makes me feel happy to read more, even though it's a little bittersweet at times as everyone is growing up and older. Are we going to hear about the rest of the day? I'm sure it would be eventful and full of fun. Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2014.10.13 - 02:56PM Title: Chapter 1 Thank you so much for the conversation between Harry and Lily during the broom ride about how marriage comes first. I often talk about marriage coming first, and people say, "No, the kids come first." Well, the needs of kids do often come first in the moment, but marriage is the central relationship that, as you said, effects all other relationships. I'm also glad you had Harry say, "It doesn't mean you love us any less." Marriage coming first doesn't mean love for others is less, just that every relationship needs to be in its proper place so that they all can flourish. Stories that don't get that right are a pet peeve of mine, so thank you for this story of a family where everyone loves everyone else so well! Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.10.13 - 08:48AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.10.11 - 02:43PM Title: Chapter 1 Oh come on WHO WON THE BET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kutgw | |||||||
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