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Reviewer: emperorvinayak Signed
Date: 2015.04.28 - 02:23AM
Title: Prologue
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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2014.10.30 - 07:53AM
Title: Prologue
Interesting start.
I will be reading more, when it is posted.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Ch.1 is completed. I'm just waiting on Beta-approval. Hopefully it'll be up in a few days.
Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed
Date: 2014.10.29 - 10:50AM
Title: Prologue
That is an excellent opening scene! It tells me nothing about where the story is going, of course, but it is highly descriptive and oddly humorous. If the rest of the story is this well-written, it will be well worth reading no matter what the plot (though I am looking forward to discovering exactly what the plot is!).
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Professor!
I was just wondering, do you as a reader want to know exactly where the story is going early on or do you like the suspense and the teasing?
Since this is my first fic, I could use some suggestions about what the readers like. I have the general story-line in mind but I'd like to present it in my own style but in a format that caters to the readers.
Thanks again!
-ST
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed
Date: 2014.10.28 - 12:03PM
Title: Prologue
Hmmm interesting, don't have any idea what the time frame is either.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review,
The story is set after OoTP, so Harry will be starting his sixth year at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed
Date: 2014.10.28 - 10:36AM
Title: Prologue
Interesting start. Will have to read more to see where this is going.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I have a good idea where to take this, the first chapter is sort of done. Just waiting to give it a once-over and I'll try to get it out ASAP.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed
Date: 2014.10.28 - 09:28AM
Title: Prologue
Well! You are certainly off to an intersting start. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
Author's Response: Thanks mdauben!
I wanted to get some suspense going at the very beginning though I think I should have mentioned some of the plot. But since this is just the prologue, I wanted to keep it really short and sweet so that the readers can get used to my writing style and see if they want to continue with it.
The first chapter will be out very shortly and it's finished. Just needs some editing.
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