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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.12.02 - 07:13AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
This story is absolutely terrific. I love your characterizations of adult Harry and Ginny and how they interact so well together. I'm really glad that Harry believed Ginny's worries when Ron and her team mates didn't. I'm really looking forward to the last chapter and hope it will be posted soon. Congratulations on winning the People's Choice Award.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've sent the last chapter off so it should be posted shortly. Congrats to you as well - I really enjoyed your story.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.11.28 - 03:38AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
IOh Poo.. Hope we see the update soon. Great chapter and very interesting story
Tricia
Author's Response: Thanks! I just sent my last chapter off so it should be up soon.
Reviewer: Akvis Signed Date: 2014.11.21 - 10:36AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Looking forward to the next chapter. And kudos for the interesting muggle/wizard plot concept.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2014.11.19 - 11:36PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
We have to wait until voting is over for the conclusion?! No! I didn't suspect Neville being involved, so the outcome should be interesting.
Author's Response: I know, sorry. I didn't get it finished in time. Hope you like the ending :)
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.11.19 - 10:20PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Interesting story.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Very nice so far - I like stories where Auror Harry meets Ginny for the first time. Looking forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 12:09PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
This is turning out very well. I only have one comment that is not a rave--would Harry still be Teddy's godfather if Sirius was alive and being a parent to Harry? It always seeemd to me that in canon Harry gets the job because Sirius and James were unavailable It doesn't make any difference in your story except that Harry might be a godbrother not a godfather. But thats a small point. I will be curious to see what happens with Neville--and with Michael. If they have both helped to hide the stalker's identification, then in many modern societies they would be disciplined including possible termination. I have always assumed that magical society is not as rigrous in ethics and procedures but look forward to finding out. I am guessing that GInny and Harry are not going to be happy with Neville. But will Molly assume that its still Ginny's fault since she broke his heart or will she decide that Ginny traded up if she ends up with the hero?
I look forward to reading more. Very enjoyable. Thanks.
Author's Response: I debated what Harry's role would be in Teddy's life and decided that while Sirius was still alive and a good option they may have still chosen Harry. I see it as honouring the good role model Sirius was with Harry. I know that sounds a bit backwards, but I figure they might give Harry the job knowing that Sirius was in the background as well.
I agree with your assessment of magical society - I mean all of the Malfoy's should have gotten life sentences, but there will be some reprecussions both on the job front as well as within the Weasley family. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 09:04AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
First some belated beta duties:
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Ginny found the food to be simply, but delicious
Ginny found the food to be simple, but delicious
I liked how you had threw Harry and Ginny together without it being too contrived. It made sense with the flow of the story. I like how you are handling Ron and Ginny even though it is "off screen". Your portrayal of Teddy was very cute and engaging and I also liked how you had Ginny and Teddy interacting. I also liked the plot twist at the end.
However, Neville's time as an auror could be short. In the real world, that is called obstruction of justice and would not be tolerated in the police force. Neville may even have put the stalker on Ginny's trail.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I made the corrections. I'll be sending the last chapter soon. I'm glad everything seems to be flowing well. I had a lot of fun writing the Sirius & Teddy part. I always imagine Neville wanting to be an Auror simply because of his parents not out of any ambition of his own. Neville's role in everything will be clear :)
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 03:17AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Great chapter, I loved how easily Ginny fitted in with Sirius and Teddy :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I imagine she'd have a great time with Sirius & Teddy :)
Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 02:22AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Yay! A super quick update! Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately I won't be able to post the ending until after the judging.
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 01:53AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Wow, great story! This was the first time I read your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Talk about a great ending too. Neville had the purity charm put on it and probably accidently helped her stalker get closer to her. That is going to look really bad, especially since him holding back information could compermise the investigation. Anyway I can't wait for the next one! I am looking forward to more Harry and Ginny, hopefully a little Teddy too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I love writing Teddy, he's so cute. Neville will probably be in for a bit of a rough time - imagine Ginny's reaction.
Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 12:50AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Great chapter, but poor pussy, poor pussy cat (any Right Said Fred fans out there?!) Love the family set up with the boys, and Teddy is so cute calling Sirius Papa. As always, looking forward to more xx
Author's Response: Thanks! A bit of Fatal Attraction in there. Glad you like Teddy - I figure Sirius is like a grandfather, but he would have been under 40 when Teddy was born so I went with Papa.
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 12:22AM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
That was unexpected! So I wonder if cousin looks similar to Michael and meet Ginny when he was setting up the charm?
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying the story. Good guesses, more will be explained in the next chapter.
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 09:28PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Oh, I love a fast paced fun story! Poor pathetic Neville and clueless Ron. Those two don't have a lot good going for them, do they? But Harry and Ginny shine through nicely and it's always nice to find a story in which Sirius is still alive! I'm looking forward to the next installment. Keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do love Sirius as a father figure for Harry. I will post the last chapter once the judging is over.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 08:54PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Oh boy nevelle what have you done now....kutgw
Author's Response: I know, poor bumbling Neville :)
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 08:11PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Wow i like your story. Question does Harry have any friends at all or just co-workers and does he have any experience in past relationships?
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Harry doesn't have as many friends his own age and the relationship issue will come up once the stalker is caught. I didn't feel it appropriate to have them start a relationship before then.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 04:17PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Interesting developments in this chapter. I wonder how Neville is related to the events of Ginny's stalking? Can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response: Thanks! More about Neville in the next chapter :)
Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 03:24PM Title: Chapter 4 Try outs
Well, well, well Neville - what have you been up to???? Great chapter. I love the whole Sirius, Harry and Teddy family dynamic. I'm sure Ginny will fit in just fine!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to show a bit of the Black-Potter-Lupin household. I just really imagine the three of them making a wonderful little family.
