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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.08.14 - 08:24PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

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Enjoying this story. Keep the new chapters coming.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 05:47AM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

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I wonder what for interests the mysterious old woman has in the two of them. I suspect that we will have to wait a while for a full explanation.
Petunia is seemingly always good for a surprise.
Many thanks for that great instalment.



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2015.06.12 - 04:33PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

Great story, well-written, except for this one sentence:

Then we got the rest of our stuff, until we only need a wand.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.01.29 - 04:02PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

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Date brings an interesting twist to this story.



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2015.01.29 - 09:31AM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

Interesting chapter. You have a couple of glaring errors. The first is at the beginning with the argument, you have 'are two' when it should be 'are too'. The other at the end, you have unicorn tail feather as a wand core. As you know, unicorns do not have feathers. Just thought I'd point those out.



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2015.01.28 - 10:10PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

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Phew, for a moment there I was worried that Aunt Petunia would take the key to Harry's vault and start taking his money, or controlling him by "managing" his finances for him....

Great story, please keep writing it!!!



Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2015.01.28 - 10:09PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

Phew, for a moment there I was worried that Aunt Petunia would take the key to Harry's vault and start taking his money, or controlling him by "managing" his finances for him....

Great story, please keep writing it!!!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.01.28 - 08:42PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

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Great update.
Looking forward to more.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.01.28 - 07:48PM Title: Chapter 6: A Revelation (Of Sorts)

Why did aunt petunia go when there was nothing for her to do, other then maybe get some money out of Harrys vault....kutgw




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