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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.29 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 7: The First Year In a Nutshell

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It felt very rushed and exactly like canon. If you want to skip huge periods of time, you can just summarize your differences instead of skimming the year. I can't imagine they would have befriended Hermione so easily. Harry and Ginny have their 'new' friendship - they've never seen each other before and its new having the actual person instead of just in dreams. Hermione didn't go out of her way to make friends and she doesn't add anything to the story line, she and Ron aren't going to become best friends without another reason and they don't have one in this story. You've done such a good job in setting up Harry and Ginny's bond, but you don't show his friendship with the Ron and Hermione in any detail and just assume they would be as inseparable as ever. In previous chapters Ron was suspicious of Harry and now they are best mates. Instead of relying so much on canon, show us how the different relationship between Harry and Ginny affects their relationship with others.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 06:00AM Title: Chapter 7: The First Year In a Nutshell

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The sorting scene was very interesting and enlightening. Now we know that the two of them cover the strengths of all four houses.
I was a little surprised that Ginny's birthday is in May. However, since she is the twin sister of Ron, it is only logical that one of the two birthdays had to be shifted. Funny thing that you made Ginny older than Harry. After giving it a second thought, I like it! It is a refreshing new aspect. Maybe it will become handy late on.
Great chapter! Thank you!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.02.21 - 03:57AM Title: Chapter 7: The First Year In a Nutshell

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Good story so far. Just wondering...is there a reason you made Ginny's birthday May 11 instead of August 11?



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.02.14 - 10:58PM Title: Chapter 7: The First Year In a Nutshell

poor harry still has to go thought the door and saves the day but still stuck with his aunt....kutgw



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2015.02.14 - 08:13PM Title: Chapter 7: The First Year In a Nutshell

It's Ginevra not Ginerva. You have it that way throughout the Sorting scene. Hopefully, the next years will be more detailed.




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