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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.08 - 08:25AM Title: Chapter 15: A Fourth Champion

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It is good that Ginny gives her dreams a bit more attention. However, her dreams are fairly confused, with many different incidents. It will not be easy to decipher them.
The long conversation at the end was fun to read. I always like long conversations between the two of them. Especially when they are so well done.
Great chapter! Thank you!



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.06.26 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter 15: A Fourth Champion

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So Ron's a git in this one. Wonder how long it will last in story.

Thanks for sharing.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.06.26 - 04:52AM Title: Chapter 15: A Fourth Champion

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Great chapter.
I'm glad Harry has a committed group behind him to help in with the tournament. Ginny, Sirius and the others (Hermione, Remus ) will help him all the way. He missed this in canon.
Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.06.25 - 12:20PM Title: Chapter 15: A Fourth Champion

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You've done a nice job of incorporating Harry and Ginny's bond into the original scenes of the story. I wish Harry had had such support in GoF. He certainly wouldn't have felt as lonely as he did at first. Just having more people believe him that he didn't put his name in the Goblet is going to do wonders for his self-esteem, even if Ron's being the git he was in canon. Oh, by the way, the British sign Ron flashes Harry is a bit different than the American version you used. You might want to look it up. Hee, hee!

Well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.06.24 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 15: A Fourth Champion

Ah Harry and Ginny in the chase together that's going to be fun....Ron never going to figure this out any time soon....as for f & g they got what they deserve.....kutgw




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