Reviews For Don't Cry, Daddy
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2015.02.28 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2014.12.09 - 12:45PM Title: Chapter 2
Very nice, thank you!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2014.12.02 - 07:33AM Title: Chapter 2
This is a nice story, but it's seriously missing any Quidditch action. I know the Challenges are left to the interpretation of the participants, but since this Challenge specified a Quidditch-central story, it implies that there will be more than a passing reference to the game in the submitted stories. I hope to see another of your stories in future Challenges.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.11.17 - 06:42AM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 04:15PM Title: Chapter 2
I liked that. I don't think I've read anything where Harry and Parvati are a couple before, but you made it very natural and easy to believe.
Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2014.11.16 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter 2
Sweet idea, but I have to admit I'd have liked a chapter or two more explaining how they got from first chapter to end. Thank you for submitting such a cute tale for the challenge.
Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 2
A great story. Short to the point. Yes you could have made it longer but I think it's just right.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 12:59PM Title: Chapter 2
Great ending! It would make a great longer story, but very sweet :)
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 12:53PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I don't think I've read one where the date between Parvati and Harry turned into a real date. Nice intro.
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 03:49AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, no! You skipped the most interesting part! It would fun to read about them getting together, James's reaction and other things..
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2014.11.15 - 03:42AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start and I am curious about the relationship between Harry and Ginny. Did he break with Parvati after the funeral as well?