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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.06 - 02:16AM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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Great couple of chapters ( real life getting in the way, again.).
I have read a couple of reviews and glad my thoughts were right. Hermione is Lily's mum. Hermione must have sent her parents to Australia, like in canon.
Loved the way they talked a little about the battle and Neville.
Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 04:15PM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

Ah Harry is gone right now and if he can get Ginny alone for 5 more mins he will be in like flin.......kutgw



Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 04:46AM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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I guess Ron being married to Lavender kind of confirms that Hermione is Lily's mom. And since Lily's conception was an accident, Harry and Hermione didn't even have much of a romance. I wonder how the Ginny and Neville relationship came about. Were they Hogwarts sweethearts since the Yule Ball without Harry there to steal Ginny's attention, did they get together around the same time Harry and Ginny did in canon, or were they not together and hooked up during the crazy year under the Carrows and got married because Ginny got pregnant? Anyway, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Wow, good call. I can certainly confirm the first two facts are correct. As for the Ginny/Neville relationship, one of your guesses was spot on! Thanks for reading and leaving a review xx



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 10:43PM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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I like this a lot so far :D Stories with kids make for so many more weird interaction possibilities.



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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Love how Lily noticed her dad 's funny faces, and snuck the ,"she's pretty,right?" in there. Then knew enough to be polite, but make it obvious that she didn't like Susan, smart girl. I can already see her planing on how to get them to spend more time together, since she planned on owling Ali about her dad already.
I can't wait till they find out Ginny plays quidditch.
Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: As soon as a chapter is posted on the site, the next one goes into the validtion queue, which seems to be crazy busy at the moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing xx

Author's Response: Next one is the Quidditch match!



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 06:21PM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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I really like the relationship between Harry and his daughter. I also enjoyed Harry and Ginny's first meeting. I can't wati to see how that develops.

Author's Response: I love writing Harry as a dad! Thanks for reviewing xx



Reviewer: valondon Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 6 The Meeting.

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And the plot thickens :D

Out of curiosity, how long is this story supposed to be?

Author's Response: Story is 16 chapters plus an epilogue.




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