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Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2014.12.13 - 04:25AM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
Yes! I hope Ginny will not be too angry when she finds out the truth. She probably will be but hopefully not too long. Alice will convince her.
But this story can't be only about Harry/Ginny and their daughters. There has to be some action with Death Eaters. It doesn't mean I would like it. Romance is better than drama :)
Author's Response: Writing Auror strategy and fights and stuff isn't my strongest thing, so the whole Death Eaters thing is dealt with pretty quickly. Let me know your thoughts when we come to that. Cheers xx
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.12.13 - 03:17AM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
Oh, now you know they are going to be trying extra hard to get them together every chance they can. It'd be their dream come true to get the family they both long for. Also really glad Harry finally got to kiss her. Hopefully more of them in the next chapter!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.13 - 01:42AM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
Lovely little chapter.
I sort of get the impression that Ali and Lily would love to be sisters. I wonder if the truth of who they really are will change that? Hope not!
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2014.12.12 - 10:11PM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
Hahaha I can already see the girls planning their parent's next date :D It was a bit simplistic for both of them to have nearly the same conversion with their parent at about the same time. Still fun to read though.
Author's Response: Yes, I get what you mean about simplistic, but I sort of needed a filler to get me through to the next chapter. I was initially only writing Harry/Lily's talk, then I thouight, these are 9 year old girls, both craving the parental figure they don't have. I just didn't think it was too far fetched that that's what would be on their minds, especially as the girls have talked about it with each other, and both agree it could onl;y be a good thing. Hope that helps, and glad it didn't detract from your enjoyment in reading it, it was fun to write, especially when Alice mentioned Ginny and her urges! LOL Cheers for sharing your thoughts xx
Reviewer: valondon Signed Date: 2014.12.12 - 10:02PM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
"Li-er, Rose has one in her room, too.” Careful there, Harry.
This chapter made me smile :)
Author's Response: Smiles are good! Im wearing one now reading your review, cheers :)
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.12.12 - 07:33PM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
What a wonderful end to their unoffical "date"! I do wonder what will happen when the truth comes out, however? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.12 - 06:07PM Title: Chapter 8 Oh Em Gee
Ah the love making is on its way....kutgw
