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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.12.17 - 10:00AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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Great to see Ginnys story finally out in the open. I was wondering if she was hiding the truth about her and Neville's relationship, or Ali's parentage after the last chapter, but it all makes sense now. I'll be looking forward to seeing how she reacts when Harry finally tells her the truth about himself and Lily. Also, when Ron introduced Lavender as his wife, I was wondering where Hermione was in your story. It wasn't until I read some of the other reviews that I realized I had totally missed the hints you dropped that she might be Lily's mother.

Author's Response: Next chapter is Hary's story. Sometimes it does help to read the reviews in case you missed something! Thanks for R and R'ing!



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2014.12.17 - 08:04AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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That was some story from Ginny! It was captivating. I'm surprised Harry hasn't yet told her who he is.

Author's Response: Next chapter!



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2014.12.17 - 03:06AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

Don't be afraid. If I read I'll review. Write a review is not a big deal and I know they are important for the authors. I am translating some stories from this site to my native language - Czech, so I know. I am always so happy when a review comes. Actually I think about transalting this story (if you give me your blessing) but no yet, these days I am working on Hail Odysseuss by Brennus. But maybe after that...

Author's Response: PM me when u r ready!



Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2014.12.17 - 01:43AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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That had to be difficult to think abou "no Harry in Hogwarts" universe with keeping canon ending in order (I hope that makes sense, English is not my native language :D ). But you did it great. However it was maybe too lengthy so maybe some part of her story was a bit boring but not too much. Anyway I was expecting some sort of shock, some problem but there was no one. Her story was understandable.
Harry is risking. He must tell her. She poured out her heart and she could feel little stupid. She told him many things about Harry Potter and then he will tell her id is him.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks for your great review. I was worried that Ginny was rambling, but she was still in shock from her ordeal with Rita and her worries for the girls. I also wanted to get her story out, as much as her time at Hogwarts, and what she was thinking about Sirius and Harry Potter, which she would have eithger read about or maybe heard via her parents, as memebers of the OOTP. Harry's stpry is next, please let me know what you think, I found his harder to write, to justify the whys and where's things took place. Cheers xx



Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 07:43PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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Love that Ginny explained everything. I really hope he tells her the truth soon. I'm sure she would understand his secrecy, and not wanting even more attention than she gets. I mean all he'd have to do is explain how he wanted to protect Lily and Ginny wouldn't hold it against him.
Love how Neville right away took responsibility for Ginny being pregnant. You have to love how caring Neville was, even leaving her everything.
Hope you update real soon!

Author's Response: LOVE Neville!! Hated having to kill him off, but hey, that's the way it goes. Ginny would understand Harry is protecting his daughter, naturally, but thre is an obstacle. We'll learn more about Lily and Harry's background in the next chapter. Submitting next chapter right....NOW!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 05:50PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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Wonderful chapter.
I found Ginny's story very interesting.
Looking forward to Harry telling her, his story.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 04:09PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

Oh boy the do the deed and then she is going to find out he is Harry. Not sure that is going to down very well....kutgw



Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

Enjoying this story, as well as the others that I have read.
Your writing and story-telling is growing with each one.
This is an interesting take on the Alternate Universe, "Harry didn't go to Hogwarts" idea.
As for this chapter, I have to say that after Ginny spilled all of that, it is a bit unfair of Harry to "take her to his bedroom" without telling his own tale. Yes, admitting who he is would put her in danger, but I have to admit that I might see that as an unforgivable. Is there some upcoming angst? Hope not, as written, they belong together!
Nice work.


Author's Response: Harry's story is in the next chapter, so I hope you like that. A little bit of angst when and how Ginny finds out the truth is coming. I really appreciate your comments about my writing, I certainly hope I get better with each one! I also appreciate you taking the time to review. Cheers xx



Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 01:53PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

I like your story but I'm wondering where Hermione is in all of this



Reviewer: mljbar Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 01:53PM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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Love this story!!!!


Author's Response: Love this review! Cheers



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 11:09AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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It is a really interesting version canon story line and a truly heart-rending story of Ginny's life.
I hope that Harry will tell her the truth about himself soon. Otherwise I would accuse him breaching her trust.
You got me on the hook with your story, again.
br/Martin

Author's Response: Harry tells Ginny about Rose/Lily's conception next chapter. After! (Wink wink) Love that you are on my hook, enjoy the ride! LOL



Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2014.12.16 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 10 Ginny's Story

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Great chapter. I really liked hearing how things happened at Hogwarts without Harry around. I do think it's a bit weird that Harry would sleep with Ginny after her story without revealing his own, but hopefully he does so soon and she isn't too hurt by the deception he was forced to make. This also makes me wonder some of the corresponding time periods in Harry's life. Ginny seemed to have a vague idea where Harry was at certain times, but since Ali and Lily/Rose are the same age (unless I've misread something), I'm wondering how and where Harry and Hermione met up to conceive Lily/Rose during that crazy year. I'm guessing that Hermione sent her parents to Australia like in canon, met Harry when he saved her from Umbridge's muggle registration at the ministry, then her way of thanking him in the heat of the moment led to Lily/Rose, and they moved to Australia after the war to be near Hermione's family.

Anyway, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You've written a ton of stories this past year, and you always update super quick. I'm always really impressed by your work and look forward to all your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. As to your guess about Hermione, interesting!. We'll find out next chapter which I will submit later tonight. Cheers




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