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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2014.12.19 - 07:50PM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
A whole chapter full of sex and little else? I feel our relationship is getting superficial :P
Seriously, it was still good. I hope we'll get a more elaborate version of Harry's tale later though. I'm surprised there wasn't a scene in there with the girls dancing and singing "we're having another sister!" :D
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 05:46PM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
Lovely chapter.
Harry and Lily's story was, almost as sad as Ginny and Alice's. I'm glad that they have found eachother.
Looking forward to getting the OK from Kingsley to tell both Ginny and Ali their secrets.
Bring it on!!
Author's Response: You got it! Nect chapter being submitted now, just for you! LOL
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 12:11PM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
Kingsley is going to have his hand full but then again Harry will win the fight and get to tell Ginny all about who he is....kutgw
Reviewer: HeroInTheWings731 Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 11:33AM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
Oh wow, that was steamy. It seems nothing can slow down their relationship. They already get along great with each other's kids and the kids are best friends who are happy about their parents getting together. I didn't think about Harry needing to get clearance from Kingsley to talk to Ginny, but he's been as honest about who he is as a person and some of the experiences of his past, even if he hasn't told her his real name. I don't think that revelation will create any hurdle at all. Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I like steamy!! (wink wink). Thanks for your kind words xx
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 11:19AM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
A pretty steamy chapter! Glad to find out some of Harry and Lily's history in this story, though. Poor Ali. Even sadder than Ginny and Ali's story in a way. While this does not paint Hermione (assuming it is her) in a postive light, its interesting and almost believable to see how she might have turned out without Harry and Ron's friendship at school. Why do I think, though, that the Harry's secrets are going to come out before he talks to Kingsley, and that Ginny isn't going to remember what he said about more things he wanted to tell her? In any case, I can't wait to read your next update.
Author's Response: Yes, It would be interesting to see how Hermione turned out if she followed a different path. I liked your theory near the end of your comments. Have you been peeking over my shoulder?! LOL. More soon xx
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 09:25AM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
Well of course Molly knew what was going on. She offered to have the girls spend the night, not watch them for a few hours or anything. She made it so they could spend all the time they wanted together. I hope you update soon .
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 09:21AM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
wow, thats not R rated, its nearly XXX rated ;-)
I'm curious how Gin and her family will react when Harry reveals his real identity. And I'm quite certain that this will happen inside family only.
So, lets hope Kingsley will be back soon so you can continue with the story providing us with the next chapter ;-)
Reviewer: Kanour Signed Date: 2014.12.18 - 07:43AM Title: Chapter 11 Harry's Story
Hmm, mind blowing sex? Nice :D I suspecrt that Harry and Ginny will not e able to keep their hands off each other. That's good but they have two kids so... Lily and Alice probably will be spending every night at The Burrow :D
I thought this would be that chapter in which Harry would reveal his secrets, hopefully next. But maybe that will not be so easy. Maybe there will be some Death Eaters action. We are slowly approaching the end, aren't we?
Another great chapter :) I am refreshing it every hour when I see new "not validated" chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, we are approaching the end. Over half way now. Death Eater action is a bit of a non event. Will post another one soon, just for you! LOL
