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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2020.05.04 - 09:15AM Title: Chapter 2
she really is a force of nature
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2014.12.06 - 04:01AM Title: Chapter 2
Great little story so far.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 04:53PM Title: Chapter 2
yeap those kids need alot of help and now they will get it....kutgw
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 12:08PM Title: Chapter 2
Another good chapter! It seems it didn't take long for the two of them to cross paths again. It was nice to see them acting on something important to both of them like this. I think it helps show their basic compatability without just jumping into a heavy romance. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Next chapter is Ginny meeting Harry's family. Hopefully validated soon xx
Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2014.12.04 - 04:02AM Title: Chapter 2
Another story to love, enjoy and savour by one of my favourite authors. Thank you.
Author's Response: Aw, THANKYOU that's one of my fave reviews EVER!! U Rock! Xx
Reviewer: Renaugh22 Signed Date: 2014.12.03 - 11:45PM Title: Chapter 2
As I read Chapter 2 of this tale I was at first surprised and then intrigued by the inclusion of the children's orphanage as a key part of your story. In 'serendipity_50's' wonderful novel length story INNER DEMONS (65 Chapters) the children's orphanage plays a huge part in Harry and Ginny reuniting. There are some striking similarity's but I am absolutely sure that there is no plagiarism on your part.
You might want to read this beautiful work so you can see how Ginny and Harry were key in coming came to the aid of the orphanage. It s very possible you might use the same approach in coming to the aid of the orphanage in your story. INNER DEMONS can be found at Serendipity_50's own web site or at AO3 (Not my favorite web site).
I have every intention of sending you a personal message with what I hope are constructive reviews, both positive and negative of your stories to date. You are imaginative and prolific--and there in lies the rub I would proffer.
RXXII.
Author's Response: Thannks for the review. I havent read that story, and the orphanage isn't really featured again until the epilogue. This little story only goes for five or six chapters. I'll look for your PM. Thanks again xx
Author's Response: Actually its 7 chapters, and its all finished, as I usually complete writing before I post.
