Reviews For The Space Between
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.04.05 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 31
A rather melancholy chapter, but one filled with interesting conversations. I particularly enjoyed the scene between James and Albus as they talked about the girls in their lives. James offered quite the revelation about his feelings for Caroline and his intentions, or perhaps I should say lack thereof. Very powerful moment.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.04.04 - 08:54PM Title: Chapter 31
Well im glad to see al and james talk about the issues at hand, but im sorry to see al didn't go with to richmond.....as for nat she should open up more with al and then maybe she would see what she thinks she sees....as for james he may get there in the end....kutgw
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.04.03 - 09:39PM Title: Chapter 31
I apologise for the errors of my review for this story. I cannot see the white writing that is used for reviews. Not only is the typo tiny but using white letter in instead of black does not help at all.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.04.03 - 09:35PM Title: Chapter 31
Hello there. Thank you for this update. I still owe you 3 or 4 fdvidsss for your original novels. The first 3 of the 7 novels you wrote were excellent and I could hardly stop. Unfortunately, so may thinks happened at the same time and I had to give reading books abreak. I had leg and ankle inflammations, blood tests with medical confusion, an onset of menopause and t top it all, bed bug infestation. I should get back to reading your 4 novels which I am sure is as good as the other 3 I have read very soon. You are indeed an excellent write and storyteller. As for the grammatical mistakes, there are only very very few and for fan fiction, it is ok. The important thing s that your plot, characters and story hold the reader's interest. I so look forward to the next update. KUDOS to your original books. They are excellent read and I urge anyone reading g this review to take up Yellowitch's offer of a complimentary read in exchange for reviews. It is worth reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2017.03.04 - 06:06AM Title: Chapter 30
What a great chapter! Lily is just so lovable and Al is adorable and the Hinny is always on point. I really appreciate you still working and sharing this story with us.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.03.03 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter! Really enjoying the way you write about events and tie the characters together. Nat is a wonderful character who deserves a break from the hand she's been dealt.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.03.02 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 30
I just want to hug Natalie, but the thought occurred to me at the beginning of this chapter that her parents are leaving her a lot with another family. Her dad used to take her with him be he should give up some of his life style to be with her more. Will we find out who killed Samuel Kingston?
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.03.01 - 01:21PM Title: Chapter 29
Al and Nat's story will take ages? What about Caroline and James? LOL.... if we kill you, who is going to tell us the story?
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.03.01 - 12:51AM Title: Chapter 30
Dr. Temperence Brennan, the lead character in Bones. That is Nat'ls second dream job. Her first is to have a family. It is not really too much to ask. Bless her. How marvellous that Lily can keep her own thoughts about Al liking Nat. it is a very mature and responsible thing to do, bless her.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.28 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 30
You really want Nat to suffer more then she alreay has......not cool....I mean I know her body is not up to sunf but still way to kill a girls spirt......Glad the girls had a chance to have girl time away from Al and james. KUTGW
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2017.02.28 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 30
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.02.28 - 04:48PM Title: Chapter 30
Poor Nat! She doesn't seem to be doing too well. Hopefully this vacation will help, at least if she stops finding scary magical visions! I'm glad Harry and Ginny are getting some time away, too. They certainly deserve it.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.01.11 - 05:43AM Title: Chapter 29
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 01:48PM Title: Chapter 29
Another good chapter. I wanted to make one special comment on Hermione and Ron's storyline. I've read a number of stories where the couple had relationship problems after the war, but it seems they were almost always attributed to Ron. His immaturity. His jealousy. His feelings of inferiority. Its kind of refreshing to see a situation where is isn't all his fault.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 06:39AM Title: Chapter 29
Interesting chapter! You certainly covered a great deal. I'm glad that Victoire and Teddy are settled in their new home, and that Hermione and Ron are bonding more again. Looking forward to reading your next chapter!
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 02:21AM Title: Chapter 29
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.12.29 - 10:12PM Title: Chapter 29
yay! an update. that you. I hope you had a great Christmas and that 2017 will be even better than 2016. Oh, not..... not a cliffhanger..... ;\love Nat's picture of Teddy and Victoiire's child. I wonder about Al's reactions, though....Excellent job as usual and look forward to the next instalment.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.12.29 - 09:30PM Title: Chapter 29
Well if i was harry i would owll back the americans and say happy trails to you and have fun with your new toys....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.12.29 - 06:32PM Title: Chapter 29
Shes already gone for the day, Susan told her, speaking of her mother-in-law. - -I think that should be "told him".
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2016.12.24 - 06:39AM Title: Chapter 28