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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.09.02 - 03:02PM Title: Chapter 15

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Sweet bit of family time. I'm glad Teddy and Victoire are being responsible - not always easy to do. I hope they discover something about the election.

Author's Response: It's either 17 or 18 when the election will be talked about, so not too long



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.08.07 - 01:17AM Title: Chapter 15

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Loved the tender discussion at the end of this chapter.

Teddy seems to know Ginny very well. She is just intuitive when it comes to knowing some secretive things about her family.

Can't wait to find out about this election farce.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The election stuff is only going to be another few chapters, not *too* drawn out, definitely more happening next chapter.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.08.06 - 05:03PM Title: Chapter 15

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A good idea to show some family time, letting us see that there is still fun and enjoyment of life to be had even with all the issues going on. I liked the section with Teddy and Victoire too - nice to find out the practical, sensible side of her character.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you liked it. I definitely wanted some quality with T&V



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.08.05 - 07:09PM Title: Chapter 15

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A very relaxing chapter. Discussion while preparing dinner, continued during dinner then a normal sleep. When is the storm clouds going to break and the actual storm rampaging in? I can hardly wait. I fell that this chpater is a lull before the storm

Author's Response: I'm glad it was relaxing. I think the call was a good one (and not made by me so there ya go!) It's a bit of a lull sadly, but I'll try to stick these lulls in more often



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.08.05 - 03:34PM Title: Chapter 15

Teddy and Vic are moving forward and Vic has a good head on her shoulder to keep from going to far...as for Arthur to take the fall. I have a feeling that when all is done he will be ok and with Harry help he will have his pension back....kutgw

Author's Response: Yeah, now that he's out on his own, I wanted to show Teddy and Victoire's relationship as more of what one would expect. :) Harry will definitely take care of Arthur, absolutely.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.08.05 - 11:50AM Title: Chapter 15

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I love the way you protray Harry and Ginny and their relationship. Its just beautiful. It sounds like things should be developing soon in the area of the election fraud, based on the family discussion today. Can't wait to find out exactly what it going on behind the scenes with Crabbe and the Ministry.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, the election thing isn't going to be years or torture :) That would annoy me too much




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