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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.24 - 12:06PM Title: Chapter 3
I know it would make Ginny's life easier just to walk out and forget all about Harry, but I reckon she's too intruiged, and seen enough for her caring nature, to allow herself to just walk away.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.02.21 - 06:12AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah young love ain't it grand....kutgw
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.02.20 - 10:40AM Title: Chapter 3
Little does Harry know how persistent the mix of Sirius, Remus and Ginny can be. Cute chapter, especially the back and forth banter between the would-be lovers. I don't think Harry's jaded enough or Ginny too cautious to actually be immune to the other's attractiveness. By the way, this chapter was far too short for my liking. It seemed to me that Harry and Ginny were just getting into stride when you ended it.
Author's Response: I know what you mean by too short. After Harry left them, I did write some dialogue with Ginny, Sirius and Remus as to how Ginny would treat Harry if she was looking after him. However, I cut it all because Harry hadn't agreed to any further treatment, as he does next chapter. So that dialogue went into the following chapter. Hope that makes sense xx
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2015.02.20 - 09:33AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, forgot to mention: I love how you are clearly showing the difference here between a "masseuse" and a "massage therapist", by having Harry trying to use the distinction as an insult against Ginny to get rid of her. I was actually laughing out loud during that...ehm...conversations! I could just see the fireworks comin' so I really, REALLY liked Ginny's cool replies.
Author's Response: There is a chap coming up where Andromeda thinks Harry is seeing a masseue for 'those' needs, its actually one of my fave chaps, i think its number 6, look out for it and tell me what yout think. xx
Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2015.02.20 - 07:32AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh thank you, thank you, THANK YOU, for the fast update and the dedication. I am honored!!!!
LOVED the verbal sparring! I am so NOT quick-whitted that I always am amazed how people can come up with these come-backs, and in an instant. I was actually laughing out loud, so thank you for that! Needed a good chuckle!
Of course, I am STILL on pins and needles (wink, wink).
I am curious to find out what exactly caused Harry's current state. Is it "just" the accumulation of all the horror in his life? Or a terrible trigger event?
I also have a feeling that Harry is going to keep prodding for Ginny's weak spot, as I am sure he is now even more desperate to get rid of her. So I can foresee a fine explosion between the two of them coming up (gleefully rubbing my hands).
So, in short: EXCELLENT work! Thank you for sharing your talent and time with us. You have no idea how much stories like yours brighten my life!!! (bowing before you) :)
Author's Response: You are more then welcome. I can't tell you how important lovely reviews are, they really keep authors motivated, and I was uncertain whether I was going to post another chap, until I read your reviews. Believe me, I am not as quick witted as our fave couple, I usually think of something clever half an hour later. Harry did have a trigger event which has brought his past back up. That will be the final hurdle he and Ginny will have to face. Please don't bow, I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy. Save it for JKR! (and I'll be right there next to you) Cheers and thank you so much for your lovely words about my stories xx
Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2015.02.20 - 01:17AM Title: Chapter 3
More please!
Author's Response: Next chap about to be added to the validation queue! xx
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 11:17PM Title: Chapter 3
That was quite funny, i wonder if Ginny is hooked now as well?
Author's Response: Denial is where Ginny is at the moment LOL xx
Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 08:23PM Title: Chapter 3
Harry is just digging himself in deeper. Love Sirius! Such a charmer.
Author's Response: Love writing Sirius as a father figure to Harry. Cheers for your comments xx
Reviewer: Loveobsession Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 03:28PM Title: Chapter 3
How embarassing for Harry! Im blushing just thinking about it. Things are definitely hotting up :) Gotta love regular updates, thanks!
Author's Response: I know, hee hee! Cheers to the validators for keeping the updates flowing. Story is all written at my end xx
Reviewer: mljbar Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 02:13PM Title: Chapter 3
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Author's Response: I love your stars xx
