Reviews For Homecoming
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.28 - 04:24PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Love the last line of this chapter, and it certainly seems to be true. He is a very different Harry from the usual.
Reviewer: SorachiBlue Signed Date: 2015.05.30 - 07:16PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Loved the story!!M. Please continue with this story! There's still lots to expand upon!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.03.06 - 10:27AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
I've not been receiving new story emails so imagine my surprise when I log on and see a new story from you! Brilliant and different start! :)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.02.26 - 04:31PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
ah harry is on the move to go back home and make it work again....NORMAL....how will he know what normal looks like....nothing but what he has been thought is normal to him....kutgw
Reviewer: GazingIntoTheAbyss Signed Date: 2015.02.22 - 06:45PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
I am glad to see you back with another story! As a belgian, I can only approve this!
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.02.22 - 01:46PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Exciting storyline. Post Hogwarts (if I can call it that) is my favourite era to read, and it should be fun seeing which characters have survived, and what is going on in England after Voldemort's demise. Slightly ironic that Harry's been kicked out of his job on moral and ethical grounds when he's been happily screwing someone else's wife for months!
Reviewer: stefanvh Signed Date: 2015.02.22 - 02:15AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Great to see you with another story! :) How many chapters will this one be?
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2015.02.21 - 10:54AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
You're off to a great start, per your usual. I can't wait to see who Harry knows and doesn't know when he returns to England, and I hope his hopes aren't dashed. However, I suppose there will be a few more bumps in the road along the way to him discovering his true place in the world.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.02.21 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Good and interesting start.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.02.21 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2015.02.20 - 11:14AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Aha! A gripping cloak and dagger (or cloak and wand?) tale, well-crafted to entertain, and to sharpen my commenting quill!
This is a scintillating start -- your writing skills just continue to grow, leaving most of the rest of us in the dust. That, however, does not exempt it from punctilious punditry:
Belgium accent -- there really is no such thing. With a surname like Goossens, I would expect perhaps a Flemish accent. The alternative would be French.
over generous -- this is typically either a single compound word, or else hyphenated
breech the protections -- should be 'breach'. I only know this because William Saffire wrote an article about breech vs. breach years ago and this fact stuck with me, in mockery of all the much more useful things I forget.
Author's Response: Nice to see you've resolved your problems of inserting gaps in your reviews, really big gaps . Actually, I did agonise about referring to the accent as Belgium, but as Aurorofthelight points out, his natural langue could be Dutch or German, as well as French. As so little was known about Goossens, I figured Harry might think of it as a generic 'Belgium' accent and leave it at that. It's probably not technically accurate, but it's good enough, I think.
Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 11:25PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Really good start!
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 10:46PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Messed up Harry should be fun :)
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 09:35PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
HE'S BAAAAACK!!! The Mickey Spillane of startlingly spine-tingling soirees into literary brilliance has returned at last! (Was beginning to think you'd fallen into a black hole, mate!) Love the unique plot! You have me hooked on this one like a trout taking a lure in Bassenthwaite Lake! This Harry is certainly a randy lad -- and fresh off a tryst with a married lady - sleazy indeed! Can't wait to see if Harry's future in jolly olde England involves a certain fiery red head. Vous ne pouvez pas attendre le prochain épisode! Kann nicht warten, für die nächste Tranche! Kan niet wachten tot de volgende aflevering! (Translation: Can't wait for the next installment! Sorry, couldn't resist! Belguim's official languages are French, German and Dutch!) :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 09:15PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Pleased to start a new journey with you. An intriguing premise.
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 08:28PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
I find it interesting story
Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 07:35PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Mr Brennus you are back!! Yes I am so looking forward to another brilliant story with exceptional writing and some wonderful banter. Between the characters and of course between the author and the reviewers.
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 05:27PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Nice start. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 04:14PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Oh, well done, his cock-up in Istanbul reminded me of the Bourne Identity where he could not shoot Wombosi there with his daughter on his chest…and now into his new life needs to come a feisty little Harpy Chaser eh? (one would hope)
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.02.19 - 03:29PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Interview
Always great to see a new Brennus update! I've always like stories set after the war where Harry never went to Hogwarts so I'm looking forward to this one. The idea of a disillusioned, burned out Harry is quite interesting so I can't wait to see where you take him and Ginny in this tale.