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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 07:10AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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The relationship between Harry and Tonks is fascinating. Tonks truly has no verbal filter at all! I'm also enjoying the bits of back story you're providing.

Author's Response: I think everyone knows someone like that, with no filter between the mouth and brain. I know I do...



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2016.04.25 - 01:45AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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That interesting the shopping trip

Author's Response: I'm not sure Harry would call it 'interesting' exactly...



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2015.03.06 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

One of the things I've always enjoyed about your writing is the basic subtext of knowledge and literacy you infuse in it: your reply to a comment about your drawing "a melting clock" prompted a LOL from me!

Since that may not be a commonly groked cultural reference, want to be sure to acknowledge one of your gems.

Thank you for accessorizing your content...


Author's Response: This is what comes of having a ex-wife who has a degree in fine art. Not that my life isn't pretty surreal at the best of times...



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.03.06 - 11:02AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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great fun to read!

Author's Response: Don't worry, it will get nice and miserable soon.



Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2015.03.04 - 05:01PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

I like this kind of fics. Interesting start and I guess finding cursebreakers leads to Weasly )

Author's Response: It's distinctly possible...



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.03.04 - 12:56PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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I have to agree with Zorica - I want pictures! As always a great job. I love Tonks version of shopping.

Author's Response: I did break out the crayons and have a go at drawing Harry, but apparently I lean towards the surrealist school of art and drew a melting clock by mistake. Damn, I was hoping for fauvism...



Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2015.03.03 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Apparently, looking for a curse breaker is going to lead to not just one Weasley...but two!

One for each. Bring 'em on!

Author's Response: I do like a certain symmetry in these things.



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.03.03 - 08:20AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Great chapter,
Glad Harry is going to try and get into Grimmauld Place. As he said, it is a place of a lot of good memories....not just bad ones.
Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: He might end up making a few new good memories, too, hint, hint.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 10:02PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Great Bathilda Bagshot's blibbering humdingers! The Cicero of cutely contrived conundrums has conceived yet another round of literary brilliance! (BTW, apparently the word Tat translates to Tat in most European languages). Always liked that word but not the phrase tit for tat! Four hours of shopping? My feet hurt even thinking of that! Incidently, was that cold lager Harry was drinking a Harp, per chance? I guess if Harry had to get an earring I'm glad it was the left ear and not his nose or belly button! Too bad you didn't think to have him get a Hungarian Horntail tattoo on his chest! ;) Tonks and Harry as partners make Starsky and Hutch look tame -- and they're alot more fun! Can't wait for the next one!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Back in my days in Retail Banking (*shudder*) I attended a training course where the trainer challenged our preconceptions of what shopping actually is. As she pointed out, it doesn't have to be dragging around a super market or standing around gormlessly as your other half tries on shoes. Basically, it could involve purchasing anything that is dear to you. By this reasoning, I now consider myself to be 'shopping' when I'm in a pub purchasing cold lager and assorted bar snacks for hours at a time. Having consulted Google, I was shocked to find that they still make Harp lager. My only question would be why anyone would want to drink that weak, flavourless, disgusting piss-water in the first place. I assure you, Harry only drinks continental lagers!



Reviewer: zorica Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 09:44PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Wish this story had pictures. I would love to see what Harry looks like with his cool clothes and earring. I do have an imagination but it's getting a bit rusty in it's old age. I'm settling in and am ready to enjoy another Brennus masterpiece. Bring it on.

Author's Response: I could probably knock something up with my giant crayon set.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

ah harry could have a lot of fun with tonks but its going to be tough////kutgw

Author's Response: He'd of hated himself in the morning. Probably.



Reviewer: stefanvh Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 02:52PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Great to see a new chapter from you. :)
Yes, you did have to mention that, didn't you...? I suppose the fact that this is supposed to be a site dedicated to the beautiful couple of Harry and Ginny doesn't matter, right? haha. I can only hope for an appearance in chapter 4. Or 7...
On another note, will there be any Weasley bashing in this story? Like you did in Butterfly Effect or Thorny Rose?


Author's Response: Snigger. You must admit you were a bit quick off the mark, weren't you? BTW, you have guessed what chapter Ginny appears in the flesh, although she enters... gradually... before that. I can also confirm that no Weasleys were harmed in the making of this story. Hell, I'm even nice to Ron, for a change.



Reviewer: ILoveHarryAndGinny Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 01:19PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Doesn't everyone (British) love Coco Pops?
Glad to see (I'm hoping) a curse breaker Ginny, I hope you do her justice.
You have scarred and scared me for life, teenage Harry wanking off to Tonks? That's just plain creepy.
No doubt everyone has an interesting past, though I might seem cruel to be glad Remus is (probably) dead...

Author's Response: Sadly, as I'm avoiding full-fat milk and I can't eat cereal without it, I haven't had a bowl of Coco Pops for ages.

I'm not saying how I came up with the idea of Harry spying at Tonks through the keyhole, but I will say my best mate when I was at school had a very cool older sister... ahem.

Alas, poor Remus, I knew him well. Actually, I do kill him off quite frequently in my stories, don't I? That will teach him to leave a poor, pregnant Tonks, the git!



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 12:18PM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Very good backround story.

Author's Response: The foreground story isn't bad, either.



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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I continue to love your brash, flirty version of Tonks. She's a real hoot and she really does seem to be good for Harry. I'll be looking forward to seeing what your crime fighting duo get up to now that she has Harry straightened out, and also to seeing you work Ginny and Bill into the story.

Author's Response: 'now that she has Harry straightened out' Is that an innuendo?



Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 11:20AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

Have enjoyed these first 3 chapters. Very much looking forward to your updates! Looking forward to how the Weasleys get introduced and finding out the backstory. Assuming they still fought - had they ever met, etc. You've got my attention! Hope your updates will continue to be this regular.

Author's Response: Oh, that sticky 'submit' button strikes again! Again!!



Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2015.03.02 - 11:20AM Title: Chapter 3 - Camden

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Have enjoyed these first 3 chapters. Very much looking forward to your updates! Looking forward to how the Weasleys get introduced and finding out the backstory. Assuming they still fought - had they ever met, etc. You've got my attention! Hope your updates will continue to be this regular.

Author's Response: As is my way, this story was totally completed before I posted the first chapter, so regular up-dates should be assured. assuming I don't get hit by a meteor or something. Err, is it suddenly getting hot in here?




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