Reviews For Homecoming
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.30 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Fascinating dinner party at the Greengrass residence! I know I'm missing some vital clue about this family and their motivation and level of involvement. Ginny's reaction was quite understandable and reasonable. I'm glad she talked with Harry about her concerns and that he was able to reassure her. Now, how did the man disappear?
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2016.04.25 - 02:56AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.04.11 - 02:35PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Well, I would ask where Paul Daniels is hiding except that there is going to be a clever explanation, as good as the wardstones, for the disappearing suspects. Greengrass is shifty enough to be up to no good, but if he is involved in the case I'm puzzled as to why he would draw attention to himself by seeking Harry out. Just have to wait for the answers...
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 09:01PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Where is my mud pit??? It was a good chapter with lots happening even without mud. Now I look forward to Harry meeting Molly :) It sounds like it will be fun. Why do I get this feeling that Greengrass and Winter are related, and not just by their names being opposites?
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 06:09PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
If Harry thought about it he could think of one invisibility cloak......kutgw
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 02:58PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Glad to see the Tonksmobile Mk II make its debut! The whole idea is just too much fun to drop. Harry and Ginny's dinner with the Greengrass family seemed to raise more questions than it answered but I'm feeling more and more that they are somehow involved in the big scheme. If I could just figure out how the cake shop, the flyers and the Greengrasses are related! I am looking forward to seeing Molly's reaction to Harry. The "adopted son" relationship they have in the books and most fanfic is so deeply ingrained in the two character's identities it will be fun to see how you portray them! Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 11:29AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Reviewer: mljbar Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 09:38AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 02:42AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Great story so far. Great development of the mystery, and the relationships.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 09:49PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Well spread me on a saltine cracker and call me an hor dourve! The Michelangelo of magnificently mind-blowing manuscripts makes our day with more literary magnificence! (Filch Note: I have never seen his boxers myself, but anyone who addresses his cat like it's his wife definitely would wear polka dot boxers!) Holy Hotrod! I for one am glad to see the return of the Tonksmobile! Now all you need is a Tonkscopter! Interesting tete a tete at the Greengrasses - something smelleth rotten in South Yorkshire! Nice to see Harry and Ginny finally able to complete the horizontal tango...several times from the R-rated sound of it! Unless the wardstone was rubbish, that scum disappearing seems to be some kind of new magic (almost sounds like a Klingon cloaking device)! Can't wait for the next round! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 08:46PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
So my money on Greengrass family checking out for potential competition in the political area, plus alliances that can be made to benefit them.
Reviewer: ginny92 Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
I cannot wait to see where this all leads!
Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 02:24PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
So in this story, will we have the epilogue when Ginny realizes that Harry has classic male pattern baldness, a belly and sagging tattoos, And he has not stayed the same as the long-haired rogue she first was attracted to? And a smoker's cough and ....
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 12:31PM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
I really love the relationship you've developed between Tonks and Harry as well the two couples. It's nice to see Harry get a supportive older sister. I'm quite curious about how the man disappeared so easily - can't wait to read your explanation.
Reviewer: Mistress_Lrigtar Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 10:55AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Well, Harry is certainly showing his sweeter side in this chapter - buying Tonks a car, and exposing his vulnerability to Ginny. Overall, a fairly fluffy chapter for the great Brennus. I enjoyed the chase sequences and am very curious to discover how the mysterious figure Tonks and Harry were chasing disappeared! I'm still not certain what the Greengrass' agenda is, other than perhaps affiliating themselves with someone they think is powerful and could help them in the future. Looking forward to more, and absolutely can't wait until Harry meets the Weasleys!
Reviewer: stefanvh Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 09:12AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Well that was a nice progression in Harry and Ginny's relationship. Can't wait to see Molly's reaction to them.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 02:48AM Title: Chapter 12 - Corrosion
Well that is a mystery how that bloke just disappeared!