Reviews For Homecoming
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.10.30 - 11:06AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Great ending to this story!!! Hope to see you working on something new soon. I love your writing!
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2016.04.25 - 03:06AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
This is a interesting story
Reviewer: Nariem Signed Date: 2015.07.29 - 04:37AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
So I made myself an account, just to post review for ya :)
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.07.13 - 06:52PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
After a 2nd redding of this chapter, I like the man hole gimmick.
Reviewer: Glrd Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 08:54AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
As usual, great story! I love your ending for its final twist and calm epilogue. I look forward to the sequel if you still plan to write it and otherwise will be on the look out for any new story of yours.
Reviewer: Milk Signed Date: 2015.05.15 - 02:03PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
It's been a while since I've read a whole fanfic without stopping. Yours was lovely enough to draw this lurker out to review. Thanks for the ride.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.04.29 - 01:43PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Another really enjoyable storey from the Brennus! I always particularly like "after the war" stories, where Harry and Ginny never met. It seems to alIow the writer a bit more freedom in developing the Harry/Ginny relationship. I also loved the atttention to the Harry/Tonks friendship. She's a very intersting character who does not get a lot of "screen time" in most stories (when she survives that is!) The mystery was well developed and kept me guessing right until the final denouement. Lots of drinking (per usual!) and some great action It was a treat from beginning to end. If you feel the urge, I'd definitely love to read another story in this setting.
Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2015.04.27 - 11:09PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
I swear I'm not buttering you up, but do you write professionally? I have read all of your stories and can't think of even one of them that I don''t like. Thank you for taking the time to write such enjoyable fanfics. And thanks also to Mrs. Brennus, for sharing your time with us.
Reviewer: stefanvh Signed Date: 2015.04.25 - 06:54PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
This is a great end to a great story. Love the irony of the waitress foiling the plan. I knew that the Greengrasses were up to no good...
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.04.25 - 01:37PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Maybe not as messy an ending as I was expecting, but full of action and good teamwork nonetheless. Nice that an unremarkable Muggle thwarted Greengrass' grand plan, especially as Harry etc were lured to barge in like a herd of elephants. If you get inspiration I'm sure there's potential for more from this universe - it feels like there's plenty still to learn about the characters.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.04.24 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
EPICUREAN NOTE: Ironically, I had a hot dog for lunch yesterday with ketchup, onions and relish(myfav)! And to think many people here in Oklahoma think I'm weird for preferring ketchup on my hotdogs! Maybe I should just tell them it's my British ancestory! :):):)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.04.24 - 03:40PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Very nice and very twisted end to your story, nice to see everyone happy ever after working out except for greengrass that is....kutgw
Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2015.04.24 - 07:01AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Brilliant! I had few correct guesses, but I would never think that instead of a bomb it's going to be such a intricate plot ). Kind of strange that after all the planning they would forget to disguise the wires for the webcam.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.04.24 - 05:23AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
A very enjoyable story. Different than the usual Harry/Ginny.
Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.04.23 - 10:40AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Absolutely a great story.
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.04.23 - 09:56AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Well that really was a mastermind of a story plot from you. I never expected it to be anything like that, even though I suspected the Greengrass' were involved.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.04.23 - 04:14AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2015.04.23 - 03:07AM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
I really can't believe you deprived us of a "meet the Weasleys" scene, but this was a pretty good story even without it. I enjoy the characterizations in this AU. You've set Harry and Ginny up with separate careers that may sometimes overlap when they require each other's expertise. I like that way of showing them as partners. The other major and minor characters were equally enjoyable (I even liked your Ron and Hermione in this one!). The only thing I wasn't so sure about was Kingsley, but his character wasn't expounded upon much in canon other than being a trustworthy member of the Order, so you were within reason to use him as a blank slate here.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.04.22 - 09:10PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.04.22 - 09:03PM Title: Chapter 15 - Vision Thing
That was a cute ending :) The resolution of all the crimes feels a little abrupt... and no mud pit... but overall it was a great read.