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Reviews For Raising Albus

Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2017.07.06 - 11:11PM Title: None

Enjoying your update. press doesn't change. Love how Cleo wants to make it happen

Author's Response: Cleo is sort of a force of nature. When she gets an idea she can be hard to stop. That is not always good, but I hope it balances out Albus's natural caution. I hope Jimmy Olsen is the good press and Brenda Starr is the bad press. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2017.07.06 - 11:11PM Title: None

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Enjoying your update. press doesn't change. Love how Cleo wants to make it happen

Author's Response: Duplicate review. The chapter has been moved to the correct story. Jet



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2017.07.06 - 07:08PM Title: None

Um...I think you meant to add this chapter to "Albus Potter and the Deathly Hallows," not "Raising Albus." Am I right?

Author's Response: Thank you for catching a real stupid mistake! The chapter has been moved. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.07.06 - 06:19PM Title: None

Well now that's not far to leave a cliff at the end of the book.....kutgw

Author's Response: The chapter has been moved to the proper book. It is still a cliff hanger, however. I'm not quite ready to give the next chapter to my Beta. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.07.06 - 01:47PM Title: None

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Explosive ending!

Author's Response: Posted to the wrong book as well. I have moved it. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2016.03.15 - 10:55PM Title: CH 35 Getting Albus ready for Hogwarts

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I am really enjoying your stories. Albums is so grown up. Can't wait for your next installment.

Author's Response: We are getting close to starting the next story. Albus is going to Hogwarts with all sorts of advantages that his father did not have. Of course he will have his own challenges, some of them rather surprising. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.03.14 - 01:26PM Title: CH 35 Getting Albus ready for Hogwarts

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It is a good job you do not keep us waiting too long between updates.

Author's Response: I doubt if there will be more than 30 days between updates, and many will be within a week. There is a big story left to tell. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.13 - 07:49PM Title: CH 35 Getting Albus ready for Hogwarts

Now you cant just leave a cliff hanger like this right here....what are you trying to do kill us.....kutgw

Author's Response: I expect more than a few cliff hangers. There is a lot of story left to tell. I can only promise reasonably regular updated, and that I will finish the saga. Thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.04 - 09:18AM Title: CH 34 Fame for James and Albus

Its going to be interesting to see what happens when cleo and al meet on the platform next year....kutgw

Author's Response: I can promise an interesting meeting. Thank you. Jet



Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2016.02.03 - 11:56PM Title: CH 33 Charlie Weasley Comes Home

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An emotional chapter- love the family dynamics.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love the whole Potter/Weasley families. I am glad you appreciate them as well. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.02.02 - 06:32PM Title: CH 33 Charlie Weasley Comes Home

well you do like the dramaic in this story and you cant get much more then with charlie.....i wonder how the kids at hogwarts handled everything.....nice to see the network is working well with the family and friends....kutgw

Author's Response: There is drama in the story. There will be more drama in the Albus at Hogwarts story. At the same time this is a nice family, of good people. The Hogwarts children will handle this the same way they handle all of the drama they will live through. Jet



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.02.02 - 06:26PM Title: CH 33 Charlie Weasley Comes Home

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This is a terrible thing to happen. The question is why you have decided to put this in the plot? There can be no happy ending here.

Author's Response: Why? I think Dragon tending would be very dangerous. Sort of like the deepest of deep sea professional divers, with a 2% mortality rate per year. I wanted to show the Weasley family accepting more people into the household. It will help to show Albus and his skills helping someone, and will show more of the melding of Muggle and Magical in Charlie's wheelchair and how he will communicate. I am sorry if this chapter disturbed you. I do appreciate all you comments. As you see, it took me a long time to respond to this review. I have been thinking about it. I appreciate your continuing to read the story, and your comments. Thank you. Jet LaBarge

Author's Response: Why? I think Dragon tending would be very dangerous. Sort of like the deepest of deep sea professional divers, with a 2% mortality rate per year. I wanted to show the Weasley family accepting more people into the household. It will help to show Albus and his skills helping someone, and will show more of the melding of Muggle and Magical in Charlie's wheelchair and how he will communicate. I am sorry if this chapter disturbed you. I do appreciate all you comments. As you see, it took me a long time to respond to this review. I have been thinking about it. I appreciate your continuing to read the story, and your comments. Thank you. Jet LaBarge



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.26 - 07:02PM Title: CH 32 James goes to Hogwarts

Well im glad to see the family is moving forward and that they are allowed to go to functions at hogwarts...to bad about the press but sometimes press is a good thing....kutgw

Author's Response: Sometimes the press is a good thing. Harry and Albus do not like the attention they get from the press, but at least Harry has found that it can be very useful. There do seem to be non-student spectators at Hogwarts Quidditch games in the original books, and I just expanded on that. Again thank you for the review. Jet



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.01.23 - 06:55PM Title: CH 30 Wrong Place, Wrong Time

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Is Bishop Scheria left unsupervised with Young Albus?

He studies DNA and consults with priests. He is mixing science and theology...this can be slippery for a prophesized Magi. I knew a guy once that kinda did the same thing(vaguely sorta anyway)....mostly for fun tho.

Author's Response: I doubt if the Bishop is behind closed and locked doors. I would imagine whenever they talk they are in an area where other people are not far away. If Albus was ever at the Scherica home I would expect that other family members would also be present. I go to church. It is possible to mix Science and Theology, and even good science fiction and theology. Try "Inferno" by Larry Niven and Jerry P. You are correct, however, that there does seem to be some rather major conflicts between a prophet and some Christian doctrines. There are also some conflicts between how the Magi see the world and the current state of science, something I plan to get more into. Thank you for the review. Jet LaBarge



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.21 - 07:13PM Title: CH 31 Thirteen Privet Drive

Well it looks like they are making some head way and james will have a friend on the train...plus rose of corse....now they have ted to worry about now....kutgw

Author's Response: As you should see by now, James is not going to have any trouble making friends. Of course there is more to James's story, although he will not be the focus of the next stories. Thank you for your review. I'm a little late responding, but I have been traveling and working hard. This is just a hobby. Jet



Reviewer: budabobo Signed Date: 2016.01.17 - 10:14AM Title: CH 26 Something Wicked this Way Came

great story so far, but gets confusing who is traveling with harry. you got lavender , hermione , then ginny.

Author's Response: You caught a mistake no one else caught. I am going to replace Ginny with Lavender right away. Hermione went with Harry to see McGonagall, but then Lavender went with Harry to North America. I don't know how Ginny got into the North American trip. Thank you for the review, and for catching a really dumb mistake. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.15 - 06:55PM Title: CH 30 Wrong Place, Wrong Time

Well im sorry they are finding their futures tough but then again albus and harry both are living in a dream world....kutgw

Author's Response: There is no adventure in a story if the protagonists do not have adversaries of some sort. Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.06 - 04:38PM Title: CH. 29 Luna Rolf Scamander

Now if every woman gave birth like luna, something tells me that the world would be a lot smaller of a place.....kutgw

Author's Response: I don't now. If every woman had twins, and as little pain as Luna seems to have had, who knows? Maybe we will get to see what kind of a mother she is. Jet



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.01.06 - 01:02PM Title: CH. 29 Luna Rolf Scamander

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Fabulous Luna.

Author's Response: Thank you! Jet



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.01.04 - 05:43PM Title: CH 28 Problems between Goblins and Elves and Wizards

All i can say is that their are way to many player in this story now and im not even sure where its going to go from here...which not a bad thing but i think this has going in to a new tangent.....kutgw

Author's Response: I know there are too many characters. Once Albus gets to Hogwarts there will be even more. I actually have an ending in mind. There is a direction to the story. If you want a short short, however, I am not the person for you. I apologize if I ramble too much. Thank you for continuing to read. Jet




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