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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2015.04.03 - 04:59AM
Title: CH 5 Teddy in School, Albus in Trouble
Quite an enjoyable chapter.
I think, maybe, stupidity runs in families. Ursula sounds as though she has similar views as her aunt. George is just playing with fire ( as usual).
I'm sure Albus is trying to control his magic, but he is only three. As for doing magic in front of Jean Granger; surely there is a consideration for this as she has a family of magic users.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Harry and Ginny are treading a fine line in allowing Albus to develop his magical abilities early and still staying within the restrictions of the law. See my other comments on Ursula.
Hermione is pushing the limits of the law and tradition by allowing Jean to use the floo with Rose and Albus.
George pushed too far, not unusual for George.
Thank you for the review!
Jet
Author's Response: Harry and Ginny are treading a fine line in allowing Albus to develop his magical abilities early and still staying within the restrictions of the law. See my other comments on Ursula.
Hermione is pushing the limits of the law and tradition by allowing Jean to use the floo with Rose and Albus.
George pushed too far, not unusual for George.
Thank you for the review!
Jet
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2015.04.02 - 10:10PM
Title: CH 5 Teddy in School, Albus in Trouble
LOL I think both George and Ursula have a death wish!
Author's Response: Getting Ginny mad at you is not a good idea, but Bat Bogey Hexing a Ministry employee is not a good idea either.
George was really stupid; he should have known better.
I had fun writing this chapter.
Thank you for the review.
Jet
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2015.04.02 - 04:20PM
Title: CH 5 Teddy in School, Albus in Trouble
Leave it to umbridge to screw anything up, and albus is not doing anything that any normal child does but just becuase hes harrys kid thats not right......PLAESEZZZZZ..........kutgw
Author's Response: Ginny is not being contrite, and Ginny, Harry and Albus are pushing the law just a little. Ursula has other problems, however, and she is taking some of her anger out on the prophets.
Getting Ginny mad at you is not a good idea, but Bat Bogey Hexing a Ministry employee is not a good idea either.
I had fun writing this chapter.
Thank you for the review.
Jet
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