Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2015.06.11 - 01:42PM
Title: CH 11 Harry’s New Elves
Harry has his hands fun, but in a good way...albus is growing up understanding that he screwed up and excepts it is a big step....kutgw
Author's Response: Harry does have his hands full with Albus. The challenges are going to continue.
Thank you for the review.
Jet
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2015.06.10 - 10:00PM
Title: CH 11 Harry’s New Elves
This was a good chapter.
The only thing that I would be a bit weary of would be the language that Albus and Rose use at the end of the chapter. They are only 4or 5 and you have them talking as though they were a lot older than that.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I do have a hard time making their language age appropriate. They are very bright, and would talk more like an adult than a normal child, but I agree with your comment.
Thank you for the review.
Jet