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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.09.01 - 08:49AM Title: CH 13 The Evolution of the Magical World
Interesting meeting all the different magical people from all over the world. Just one thing...is there no magi from Australia??
Author's Response: There are no Magi from South America in the story either. I assume there are Magi in Australia, but I just have not written them into the story. If you have something you can suggest, unique names and personalities of a couple with a child or children, a unique name for a house elf, I would be glad to add it to my story.
I am creating characters for the books about Albus at Hogwarts, so I could use an Australian child or two there. Give me some ideas, and I will credit you in the story.
Jet
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.08.24 - 10:55AM Title: CH 13 The Evolution of the Magical World
With all the people and elves and goblins being introduced at the meeting it felt more like doing school work than part of a story A bit more action and less detail might be a good thing.
Author's Response: More action is coming. I can see from this chapter and the next that I am sort of setting the stage for what comes next. Part of this and next chapter start to develop Rose's personality. She is not a clone of Hermione, although they are very similar in some ways.
I appreciate your comments! You remind me thatjust because I write something I may be able to just cut it and not post it if it does not advance the story.
Jet
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.08.23 - 01:48PM Title: CH 13 The Evolution of the Magical World
Ah the great debate to intervene or not to... Only time will tell if Harry is right........kutgw
Author's Response: Harry is not going to be at the center of the action all the time. Eventually we will see him having to let other people do their part to advance the plot, and get the good guys to win. There is a lot going on behind the scenes here.
Thank you for the review.
Jet
