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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.24 - 07:50AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

I'm hooked!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.23 - 11:31AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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I'm hooked!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.04.13 - 06:55AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

I'm sorry that the weaselys are now dead but Ginny is not going to be in good shape. Kutgw

Author's Response: Ginny is tough and she does what she has to for what is left of her family. But inside her is still that little girl who wants a family. Hence the title xx



Reviewer: decdraft Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 09:33PM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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This is going to be a great story! The juxtaposition between everyone all happy and close friends with all the deaths was so bitter sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: More deaths in the next chapter, as we deal with the final battle. xx



Reviewer: ILoveHarryAndGinny Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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Well I must say that introduction has definitely made me want to read more! If I'm honest, I was never very fond of Molly Weasley, and I'm quite glad to see the end to Ron and Percy too (though it's a shame about Gred and Forge) It will be interesting to see exactly where this story leads, and I do love an evil, manipulative Dumbledore...

I guess I'm far too cynical for a teenager.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hee hee, if you're not a fan of Mollys you will love my next story. But I digress!! Would love to hear more of your thoughts as the story goes, cheers xx



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 04:20PM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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You write children so well. I love that Harry and Ginny were special friends and that Ron and Neville had a mutual love for Chocolate Frog Cards. So many deaths in one night is tragic as is the disappearance of Harry, Sirius and Remus. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I really loved writing the James/Ginny interaction, as I think James would have loved a daughter like Ginny, and I really wanted to show how close they all were. Thanks for your review xx



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 11:26AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

Magnificent start to this one but a real departure from your norms! Surprised you took out most of the Weasleys right from the get go! I guess it was necessary for the story! Very interesting plotline too! Can't wait for the next one!
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Author's Response: This is just the back story, but I hope once you read the next chapter it will explain why Harry and Ginny are the way they are in later chapters. xx



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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Author's Response: Pretty stars !! xx



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 04:19AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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Boa, what a cruel, sad beginning. That’s for sure a promising starting point for a story. I'm really curious to see what you are up to do.

Author's Response: I know! My thoughts started with what if The Potters, Longbottoms and Weasleys were all friends, being the only Order members with kids. Hated doing that to Arthur and the boys, but it then took me to where i want Ginny to be years later. Hope this will all make sense as we get into the story. xx



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2015.04.10 - 12:10AM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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Great start!

Author's Response: Cheers! xx



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.04.09 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 1 Halloween 1988

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Wow! A really tragic beginning to your new story. I'm really excited to see how it progresses. Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Author's Response: I know, I had to jump right in there. There is more deaths to come, as the next chapter deals with the Final Battle. xx




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