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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.12.26 - 06:27AM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
I was so sure molly was going to appear on the beach that I deliberately slowed down my reading so the moment wasn't spoilt!! That's a sure sign of first rate writing, that I'm so enthralled and bought into the story.
The moment wasn't spoilt but I can't help thinking the bubble is going to burst soon...and boy will it pop!
Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2015.12.28 - 05:58AM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
All the subtlety of a bull.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.07.01 - 11:07PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
So sweet!!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.15 - 04:54AM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
I am relieved that Quidditch and Auror are no longer an option for Harry. I cannot imagine that he relinquishes the control of his life to the Ministry or that he is locked up willingly in training camps for weeks. There are so many other interesting professions in the wizarding world.
Iām glad that the two of them can finally recover together. They have really deserved it as the saviours of the wizarding world.
What a cute little incident with the bikini top. I thought that something like that would happen when Ginny has found that the bikini top doesn't fit well, lol.
Great instalment! Thank You!
Author's Response: That first innocent touch changes everything, glad u liked it xx
Reviewer: Kukia Signed Date: 2015.06.11 - 07:30PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
No Review
Author's Response: Stars make me smile so thank you ;)
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.06.10 - 04:57PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
Ah the kids are finally one and happy even if its only just the begining....kutgw
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.06.10 - 04:02PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
I wonder if Molly is going to notice that Ginny is rather dreamy-eyed after her day at the beach with Harry and Sirius. I really hope she doesn't get caught because the freedom of house minding for Bill and Fleur is doing Ginny a world of good. Had to smile at Harry needing to take a swim and then a long shower at the end of the chapter. I'm glad Sirius approves and is talking to James about his son. Well done.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2015.06.10 - 02:31PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
I'm curious about what the prophecy is and how old Ginny and Harry are. They're doing magic but acting awful young
Author's Response: Hi! They ae canon age, so Harry has just turned 18 and Ginny wil be turning 17 soon. You will learn the prophecy in two chapters time xx
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.06.10 - 02:27PM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
I liked that Harry and Ginny had a bit of innocent time together before things started to get heavy. Hope Ginny doesn't give anything away on her visit home.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.06.10 - 06:49AM Title: Chapter 4 The Bond Starts
Some very nice Harry and Ginny time this chapter. I wonder how long this can last before Molly finds out? Looking forward to your next update.
