Reviews For These Cuts I Have
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.12.20 - 09:50AM Title: Coming of Age
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.12.17 - 06:26PM Title: Coming of Age
Excellent chapter. I love the way they are working together. The scene between Harry and Ginny celebrating her birthday was great. Really looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: Grownupron1 Signed Date: 2015.12.17 - 08:42AM Title: Coming of Age
Yeah sorry but these is no way Hermione shouldn't be Head Girl. I have no doubt that many students did some very brave things but if not for Hermione's actions Voldemort would have won. None of her competition can say anything even remotely similar.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 11:44PM Title: Coming of Age
I found your portrayal of the interaction between each of the senior Weasleys and Harry (re. Ginny's present) quite well done -- Arthur Weasley is pretty special, even if he manifests it quietly. (Molly's special, too, but not as subtly. :-}) And I quite liked the way Harry asked Molly why he couldn't share what he has with his (acknowledged) family -- it's a good way to put it, as it communicates effectively without stomping on others' sensibilities.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 07:20PM Title: Coming of Age
Ron was lucky to get off so lightly - winding up your sister just before she can use magic seems like a dangerous pass time. Harry faced the awkwardness with Mrs Weasley rather than just ignoring him - he is growing up. I'm glad you chose not to make Hermione head girl. Sure she would have deserved it in a normal year, but I don't think she relates well to other students and to have someone who didn't share their experiences would not go over well. Ron 'she sacrificed everything'. No, Fred sacrificed everything. Hermione made some sacrifices and underwent torture, but she is finishing school, her parents are still alive, and she's in a relationship with Ron. Glad Mr Weasley stepped in to make Ron see reason. The ending with Draco was interesting and very much in character for him - can't wait to see what happens with the raid.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 05:38PM Title: Coming of Age
Another superb chapter, Mel! Really enjoyed the Ginny's birthday bit......you'd think GInny's brothers would have learned not to mess with her by now! Wonder if Minerva has something in mind for Hermoine tho I think Ginny is right about why she isn't head girl(you are one of the few who took that tack)! Glad to see alittle light at the end of the Death Gulper tunnel! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 03:06PM Title: Coming of Age
Great chapter can't wait for the raid. I also like how Ginny isn't just jumping into bed with Harry just cause she's of age but she's waiting until she knows it's the right time
Reviewer: jojo99 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 02:39PM Title: Coming of Age
Nice to see Ginny standing up to Ron and Hermione. It wouldn't have been fair if she had got head girl. I loved Ginny's birthday morning. Hoping to see some positive news for Harry soon.
Reviewer: kitana415 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 02:02PM Title: Coming of Age
You, my dear, sling much more than just pity. I guarantee you that is a very, very good thing.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 12:46PM Title: Coming of Age
Well it seems that they are working to the end game but harry still needs to spend time with the healer for longer then a few hours....more like a few days.....and ginny is the only one to make harry do it......kutgw
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 12:30PM Title: Coming of Age
excellent. so many points of contention to deal with. expensive broom, worry about putting loved ones in danger right of being made Head Girl, etc.... i cannot wait for 3 days. can Harry?
Reviewer: hijadejewell Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 11:54AM Title: Coming of Age