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Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2017.02.21 - 06:58PM Title: Reuniting
I read through this so fast thr first time through that I neglected to leave a review. My apologies for that egregious oversight! I love your portrayal of both their respective points of view and their mutual desperation to be back together! Thank you for sharing this lovely story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: jerryfs2 Signed Date: 2016.08.22 - 04:03AM Title: Reuniting
No Review
Author's Response: Thank you for the rating.
Reviewer: 20151127yuanyuan Anonymous Date: 2015.11.27 - 01:41AM Title: Reuniting
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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.10.26 - 07:20PM Title: Reuniting
Good start. I am eager to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2015.08.22 - 06:49PM Title: Reuniting
I found this really moving...flowery words and long prose are not always needed to create mood and meaning.
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive response to this chapter.
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2015.07.10 - 05:22PM Title: Reuniting
I like the start - I'm sure Harry wouldn't have wasted any time in seeking Ginny out. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't think he would wait too long either. It always frustrates me in other stories when he does!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 06:59PM Title: Reuniting
Very nice start.
Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 09:30AM Title: Reuniting
I look forward every time someone corrects the biggest mistake of DH. I was somewhat upset that JKR hasn't even granted Ginny a reunion hug at the end. It would be the least thing she could do for Ginny after she has almost completely written her out of the story.
Many thanks for sharing your story!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was definitely the one thing I felt was missing as well!!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 07:27AM Title: Reuniting
I must have read this scene a thousand times. It was very well done, but now you need to find a more original bit of Harry's life.
Author's Response: I know many people have done this scene and I will be honest my idea formed while reading other stories. I do have some other ideas for other stories at different points in his life, but I am currently concentrating on this story.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 04:40AM Title: Reuniting
Awwww...... I am exhausted too.... shall I cry or laugh? Excellent start . When is the update due?
Author's Response: Already got another 4 chapters written and waiting for a friend to edit them for me. Next chapter shall be up in the next couple of weeks, maybe sooner.
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 02:11AM Title: Reuniting
Nice. The only criticism is the back and forth of perspectives. I don't mind multiple perspectives but the quick switches were a bit jarring and interrupted the flow of the chapter. Make the perspectives longer and it would flow better, and perhaps not of the exact same moment.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I promise this is the only chapter which the perspectives are presented like this.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 05:53PM Title: Reuniting
Now that is how they should get together for a little time with out anymore people seeing anything that they are doing....kutgw
Author's Response: Exactly what I thought when I started reading fan fiction. Hopefully you will like the next chapter as well as a result.
Author's Response: Exactly what I thought when I started reading fan fiction. Hopefully you will like the next chapter as well as a result.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 03:04PM Title: Reuniting
Very nice! Emotional and well written. To tell the truth it was the lack of exactly this scene from Deathly Hallows which first complelled me to search out the Harry Potter fanfiction community. I look forward to seeing where you take your story.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was exact same reason I ventured into fan fiction.
Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2015.07.06 - 01:46PM Title: Reuniting
This is good... Seems incomplete so it is not a one-shot...
I really hope to see the next chapter soon...
Author's Response: You are right, it is not a one shot. There is more to the story I am telling. Another chapter will be up very soon.
