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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2016.07.15 - 06:38PM Title: The First Christmas
awwww..... little Lupin just melt your heart, doesn't he, bless him.
Author's Response: Doesn't matter what story I read, Teddy always makes my heart melt!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.03.07 - 06:13AM Title: The First Christmas
Christmas morning at the Burrow was lovely. They all did such a great job getting meaningful presents. The moment with Teddy and Harry was quite well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully you will love the next chapter as it will be focused around Teddy
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.03.04 - 07:57AM Title: The First Christmas
Great chapter.
Loved how Harry got together with George, Ginny and himself and managed to prank everyone.
The painting sounds wonderful.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted something a bit different and happier than other first Christmases I have seen.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 05:21PM Title: The First Christmas
NIFTY CHAPTER - VERY MOVING! LIKE THE SCENE AT THE BORROW ESPECIALLY! ONLY THING I'M WONDERING IS WILL KREACHER STAY AT GRIMMAULD WITH THE MALFOYS OR WITH HARRY? KEEP
IT COMING - YOU ROCK! ::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: I know Kreacher has not appeared in this story but we will see him. I am keeping him with Harry.
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 04:57PM Title: The First Christmas
Some interesting developments in this chapter. After some thought, I rather like the idea of Harry selling Grimauld Place to Malfoy. There are so many stories where Harry remodels the house and moves in after the war, yet it seemed in the books that after Sirius died he didn't really want to go back there. Given that, why would he move in there when he obviously has the money to live somewhere else? I loved the pranks on Christmas and the way he got George involved, too.
Author's Response: Exactly what I thought about Grimmauld Place too! I also took into account what had been said about their house briefly in the epilogue of DH and I got the impression it was a four bedroom, based on what Harry says to James, so it obvious to me he didn't live at GP but somewhere else.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.03.01 - 09:45AM Title: The First Christmas
Ah harry was thinking about the family this morning ...and its nice to see that everyone had a lot of fun...ginny and harry needed to get teddy to know his past even if he has no clue what they are saying.....kutgw
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you liked the Teddy part. I wanted to do something a bit different from I have seen in other fics.
