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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2016.10.03 - 09:05AM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Wonderful reception chapter.
Loved the speeches. The fact that Ron knew Harry would be the one to get Ginny to cry, shows just how much he knows them...or at least took notice when others thought he didn't.
Harry dancing with Teddy sounded so cute. Ginny is right. They are a family in every way that counts.
Love the patronus at the end.
Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed
Date: 2016.10.01 - 01:03PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2016.10.01 - 08:51AM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Now that is the right wy to exit a wedding....kutgw
Author's Response: I nearly changed my mind about the patronus because of Kingsley's patronus doing the same thing during Deathly Hallows, but then I thought I might as well just go with it, because if they snuck away they would want to notify everyone they had left and no one would be scared by the idea of Harry's stag turning up with a cheeky message.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed
Date: 2016.09.30 - 11:06PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Half the fun of reading about Harry and Ginny's wedding—in all it fan fictional glory—is getting to read about the real life incidents that become part of the stories. I can just see Ginny's brothers making that bet and Ron winning so easily because he knows Harry and his sister so well.
This is such a sweet chapter, too, because Ginny knew just who she was aiming for with her bouquet and to have George turn around right there and propose definitely made me smile. However, the best image of the lot was Teddy finally falling asleep in Harry's arms as the two of them danced with Ginny. She's right... the three of them are a family in every way that counts.
All in all, well done. I look forward to the honeymoon chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have used a fair few moments from my own marriage to help me write a lot of this story as I find quite easy to relate to them as a couple. And I am really sorry, I am not covering the honeymoon in any detail, but it shall be mentioned briefly. We are going into three chapters dedicated to the births of the children before we reach our final chapter.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2016.09.30 - 08:34PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Really loved the ending with Harry holding a sleeping Teddy and Angelina catching the bouquet and George proposing. Fabulous end to the wedding reception!
Author's Response: I felt like I needed to have a dance between Teddy and Harry, but at the same time, not have it take over too much. Angelina and George getting engaged at the reception was something I actually planned before I even wrote the chapter. I felt like it was very George to just up and do it like that.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2016.09.30 - 08:13PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Very entertaining.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2016.09.30 - 06:49PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Everything you could expect from a Harry/Ginny wedding.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed
Date: 2016.09.30 - 05:41PM
Title: A Weasley Celebration
Nice to see you back with a new chapter and it was well worth the wait! Loved the reception and all the touching moments! The bet was funny! Great touch at the end with that sneaky cliffy concerning where they were going for their honeymoon! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you! The bet was inspired by something that happened between my dad, my husband and the best man. All of them (and bear in mind, alcohol had been consumed by this point) decided that they would be the one to make me cry during the speeches. I was pregnant and ill the day we got married, but my husband managed to make me cry by saying I looked beautiful. I couldn't resist adding that into the Potter/Weasley Wedding. As for the honeymoon, I am not covering it, but shall mention it briefly in the next chapter as we are jumping to the pregnancy and birth of James.
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