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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.27 - 09:35AM Title: Chapter 4 Ottery St Catchpole
It seems our two darlings get used to each other. I love it!
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2015.07.24 - 03:35AM Title: Chapter 4 Ottery St Catchpole
"Stop kissing me" she says as she kisses him... Nice
Author's Response: Sometimes a girl just has to take charge! Ginny is definitely one of those girls! LOL
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.07.23 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 4 Ottery St Catchpole
Ah now they are going down a slippery slope and may never return to normal....kutgw
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.07.23 - 11:34AM Title: Chapter 4 Ottery St Catchpole
Oh, this is getting better and better! Loved the action sequence and the fact that the villagers were looking out for each other. Had to laugh at how Luna completely flummoxed the Dark wizards with her talk of Wrackspurts. Finally, I love the last kiss and the fact that Ginny trusts Harry enough to go to an unknown place with him. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks xx
Reviewer: JJamieDupane Signed Date: 2015.07.23 - 03:24AM Title: Chapter 4 Ottery St Catchpole
This chapter is good or rather gets good towards the end!!! Seriously though, Harry shouldn't suck this bad!!! He sucked so bad that I had hard time reading further!!! Come on!!! You say he has all these trainings and yet he was a newbie at those sleath tactics... Please show somw improvement or you are going to ruin the mood for many readers
Author's Response: Harry was caught off guard. It happens *spoiler alert* it MAY even happen again xx
