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Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2015.08.04 - 04:09PM Title: What Is Forgotten Is Not Gone

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If you want to really increase the number of your readers, publishing all the chapters at once isn't really a very good strategy. People can become intimidated. I only faced it because I was sick, in bed.

A nice story, very well written, even if it is not exactly the genre I like (but that's me, the story is good in its genre).

I'd noticed something that I would call a loophole - Kylie shouldn't be old enough to have witnesses any intercation related to the location of horcruxes, but then you explained it in a later chapter, as a decision of Voldemort to relocate it. OK, I can live with that. Kutgw

Author's Response: "If you want to really increase the number of your readers, publishing all the chapters at once isn't really a very good strategy. People can become intimidated. I only faced it because I was sick, in bed." You're the first person to ever say that, and it's pretty much the polar opposite of the comments I usually receive. I've had a lot of people tell me they only read completed stories, and I think that's true for many readers. It's easy to see why, considering how many fanfictions are never completed at all. "A nice story, very well written, even if it is not exactly the genre I like (but that's me, the story is good in its genre)." What genre do you consider this story to be? "I'd noticed something that I would call a loophole - Kylie shouldn't be old enough to have witnesses any intercation related to the location of horcruxes, but then you explained it in a later chapter, as a decision of Voldemort to relocate it" No, Voldemort did exactly what he did in the book, which was to give it to Bellatrix. As you said, Kylie should not have been present at such a meeting, and she wasn't. Her parents, who are Death Eaters, were, and they unsuccessfully lobbied to be given care of the Cup (and Voldemort told no one that it was a Horcrux, including Bellatrix). Later, Kylie overheard them arguing about losing out on the honor.




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