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Reviews For Vis Insita

Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2015.11.03 - 01:09PM Title: This Conversation is Ending Starting Right Now

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I finally caught up to both stories and I have to say it was a lot of fun to read. I thought Scott was taking a lot of room in the story at first but I guess I've gotten used to the weird guy. It's all been enjoyable and I'm glad you've put Ginny in the action with everyone.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Scott was initially taking up a lot more 'room' in the story, especially in the first half of That Terrifying Momentum. I'm sure you getting used to him is a part of your acceptance, but he's also much less of a presence in Vis Insita, in the sense of character focus. His POV is used far less than it was back in the beginning.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.10.02 - 08:22PM Title: This Conversation is Ending Starting Right Now

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Your writing is extraordinary and occasionally overwhelming. I have really enjoyed reading this story. The characters are intense and well developed. I am enjoying the interaction between Harry and Ginny, as well as between Ron and Hermione. Sophie is great and I hope she manages to put him in his place soon.

Author's Response: "Your writing is extraordinary and occasionally overwhelming." Can't say I've ever been described as 'overwhelming' before. I assume that's a good thing. Probably. "The characters are intense and well developed. I am enjoying the interaction between Harry and Ginny, as well as between Ron and Hermione." Thanks, I struggle writing them sometimes but I appreciate you taking the time to tell me you enjoy how they and their relationships come across. "Sophie is great and I hope she manages to put him in his place soon." By 'him' I'm guessing you're referring to Scott. I'd say she put him in his place pretty damn well when she confronted him and made him call Lila.



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2015.10.02 - 10:34AM Title: This Conversation is Ending Starting Right Now

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Great chapter. Author's note got a chuckle too.

Author's Response: Thanks, hope to see you for the next one.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.10.01 - 04:29PM Title: This Conversation is Ending Starting Right Now

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Thanks for the Tumblr meme, at least Caleb. Review your your story, Your way.

Author's Response: I'd prefer you review my story, your way. That seems like a sweeter deal for me.




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