Reviews For Vis Insita
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.03.27 - 10:32AM Title: Wealth of Nations Part II
A great chapter again. Or perhaps I should say a great second half to an awesome chapter. I loved your explanation of the vault door security :D
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.03.11 - 01:10AM Title: Wealth of Nations Part II
Another excellent chapter! What great action cutting down those Death Eaters. The open quote was great too. A little Doctor Who inspired maybe? And with regard to the author's note, you do an excellent job balancing character and plot for which this medium is well suited. An editor in the publishing world is going to be concerned about how many pages will need to be printed as a more pressing matter than whether or not you are boring the reader.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.03.10 - 05:20PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part II
Great chapter. Your description of the bank robbery at Gringotts was truly excellent. I could see the whole event happening because of your descriptive writing. I am eager to read your next chapter.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.03.10 - 11:38AM Title: Wealth of Nations Part II
Edge of the seat stuff. Too much history stops the story unfolding (or leads to a very long story).