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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.05.08 - 07:16PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part III

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I loved Scott's final getaway up in the tower. Also the conversation Harry and Ginny spied upon; it looks like Scott might have an interesting adversary at some point. For some reason, the rest of the chapter (ie. until Scott decided to hide) didn't impress me as much. It's not that it was bad but perhaps that it was getting a bit too much routine after two chapters of them shooting at people.

Author's Response: I suppose the fighting might sort of blur together after awhile, so that's a fair criticism.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.05.06 - 09:02PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part III

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Really enjoying this story. Very curious to see how the others will respond to Harry and Ginny hearing about how they are being analyzed. Looking forward to reading the next chapter and finding out what will happen to Scott.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you keep enjoying. The thing with the Death Eaters and being analyzed won't be touched upon immediately, but it will come up again.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.05.04 - 05:53PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part III

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Since it seems a trend on the feed, nice title you chose...

The question you posed a little while back about Lupin....when nice Tits made him (paraphrasing here) "less scruffy" in the park? Clever.

Following Lila was a bit discombobulating, but I think I was sticking mostly with it. I enjoyed Scott's usage of the trees for cover. I wasn't aware there would be Australian Death Eaters. Kinda odd, that. Another great action packef chapter, mate!



Author's Response: Oh? Has there been much talk of Adam Smith lately? As for Australian Death Eaters, I'd meant that, along with the indeterminate Easter European origin of the other man, to indicate their status as outsiders.

Author's Response: Oh? Has there been much talk of Adam Smith lately? As for Australian Death Eaters, I'd meant that, along with the indeterminate Easter European origin of the other man, to indicate their status as outsiders.



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.05.03 - 11:01PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part III

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Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2016.05.03 - 07:44PM Title: Wealth of Nations Part III

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Always glad to see another chapter in this imaginative retelling. Thanks. Its interesting to see how Scott deals with Harry's problems. Climbing on the roof in the snow is a great idea when its not expected, etc. .

Author's Response: Remaining predictable will get you killed. Scott strives to out-think his enemies as much as outfight them.




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