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Reviews For Vis Insita

Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.08.27 - 12:16PM Title: Wind Down

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Great chapter! I really enjoyed Scott's call checking in. Lila's comment and retort had me snickering. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever it arrives.

Author's Response: Scott and Lila were in fine verbal form this chapter, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing, and for your patience.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.07.30 - 01:55PM Title: Wind Down

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Just remember, I am getting old. I hope you finish this before I kick the bucket.

Author's Response: Don't let Mom hear you talking like that.



Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2016.07.27 - 10:05PM Title: Wind Down

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I have to say, I really do love your stories. Your original characters are so much fun to read and see interact with the main characters. Frankly, I'd LOVE to see a series where Scott helps primes of different fandoms. The hint that he helped Spider-Man is awesome. I'd love to actually read that story. I'd love to see him interact with Indiana Jones. I'd love to see him bouncing off of Robert Downey Jr's Tony Stark. It's got such potential it's crazy. Well done!

Author's Response: Some sort of anthology story or series of one-shots like what you described could be fun, but I think I'd miss putting together a more cohesive narrative. With my writing, it usually seems like either I have an idea that barely sustains a short one-shot and falls apart if presented in a multi-chapter format, resulting in an abrupt end, or I have an idea that I can only do justice over tens of thousands of words. I feel like I'm either too brief or too long.



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.07.27 - 09:45PM Title: Wind Down

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Another fine chapter. Scott and Sophie together was lots of fun. It was also nice to see Kylie's point of view. I hope she'll be around again.

I don't mind waiting for the updates, they are well worth it. If you need to be crazy about details to write... so be it!

Author's Response: As I said to freshwater, Scott and Sophie have been mentioned in a fair number of the reviews so far. They seem to have struck a chord in this chapter, for whatever reason. Also, thank you for being kind enough to say my chapters are worth the wait.



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2016.07.27 - 03:24PM Title: Wind Down

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While I am, of course, disappointed that future chapters will be a ways off, you have to know that when readers find a fic of this quality, they will be there whenever the next chapter comes out, no matter how long it's been since the last one. I appreciate your being up front and honest with your readers about your other interests and your writing process. I appreciate the care and attention to detail that is so obviously a part of your writing.

After all the tactical maneuvers and battle strategies in the past couple of chapters, I enjoyed the character interaction in this chapter....particularly Scott and Sophie.

As always, looking forward to more! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for being understanding. As for the chapter, I think Scott and Sophie's interactions have so far received the bulk of attention in other reviews. I guess they were a hit this chapter.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.07.26 - 08:44AM Title: Wind Down

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Great chapter and I enjoyed your author's note at the end. Since I think that drinking and drinking games are rather normal activities for older teens, I am somewhat amused by Sophie 's reaction and by Scott's actually. Hermione's response was brilliantly perfect. If you are officially drinking to celebrate an accomplishment, champagne is an excellent choice.

Author's Response: Sophie's reaction was more or less explained in chapter and will be touched on again in the next, but Scott's reasoning is less clear. It's based on an aspect of his background that was only hinted at. As for Hermione, I felt having her deliver a lecture was unnecessary as also a Flanderization of her character. Thank you as always for reviewing.




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