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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2016.12.17 - 04:12PM Title: Blow Out

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Thanks for another great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2016.12.10 - 04:53PM Title: Blow Out

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Kylie's back so everything else is forgiven :D Seriously, I don't get mad reviewers. If you don't like what's written, don't read it...

Author's Response: It still strikes me as inexplicable how attached so many readers seem to be to Kylie. She's such a minor part of the story. Still, it's a nice sentiment to see.



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.12.07 - 07:27PM Title: Blow Out

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While I will fully admit to being a bit disappointed by the lack of fun with their little drunken party (I feel they really deserved a bit of fun), I still enjoyed this chapter. You included some great conversations and created some interesting questions, including of course, why are both Sophie and Scott so completely against drinking. Interested to see where this story is going!

Author's Response: "While I will fully admit to being a bit disappointed by the lack of fun with their little drunken party (I feel they really deserved a bit of fun), I still enjoyed this chapter." I know it would have been a more fun chapter to see that, but it didn't strike me as a realistic way to portray the event. "You included some great conversations and created some interesting questions, including of course, why are both Sophie and Scott so completely against drinking." Scott isn't completely against drinking, considering he facilitated the whole think and even took charge once he had the drinks. It's just that he doesn't drink, as he once off-handedly mentioned in That Terrifying Momentum. Now, Sophie is definitely against heavy drinking. Some of the reasons for that were actually touched on in the chapter, when Scott explained a little to Hermione.

Author's Response: "While I will fully admit to being a bit disappointed by the lack of fun with their little drunken party (I feel they really deserved a bit of fun), I still enjoyed this chapter." I know it would have been a more fun chapter to see that, but it didn't strike me as a realistic way to portray the event. "You included some great conversations and created some interesting questions, including of course, why are both Sophie and Scott so completely against drinking." Scott isn't completely against drinking, considering he facilitated the whole think and even took charge once he had the drinks. It's just that he doesn't drink, as he once off-handedly mentioned in That Terrifying Momentum. Now, Sophie is definitely against heavy drinking. Some of the reasons for that were actually touched on in the chapter, when Scott explained a little to Hermione.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.12.06 - 03:14PM Title: Blow Out

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I'm with Sophie.(it has nothing to do with her hot body) Ganja is a healthier alternative.

Author's Response: Some clashing cultural differences there (which Scott found very amusing).



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.12.06 - 08:33AM Title: Blow Out

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Hello, it must be Christmas. Pleasant surprise. (From a confirmed old soak).

Author's Response: More to come, hopefully. Working on it right now.




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