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Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2017.09.08 - 11:50AM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

"There was a glint in Moody’s normal eye that made Remus think that the moniker ‘Mad-Eye’ might well predate his magical eyeball."

My favoriite line! :-)

Author's Response: It was hard to tell whether Moody's eccentricities were a result of his life experiences, or if his life experiences were a result of his eccentricities.



Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.07.09 - 08:00PM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

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Nice read. It looks like everything is converging nicely. I look forward to Malfoy Manor.

Author's Response: I bet you're looking forward to it a lot more than any of the characters are. Thank you for reviewing.

Author's Response: I bet you're looking forward to it a lot more than any of the characters are. Thank you for reviewing.



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2017.07.09 - 11:37AM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

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Stop apologizing! You've written a massive and immensely complex story that has provided hours of entertainment, as evidenced by your long-standing fan-base. If we've stuck with you this long, we're not likely to start whinging now. That said, I respect your desire to do the best possible job with each chapter. And, finally....thank you, for another great chapter and more surprising twists. If there is one thing I'd never expected it was for Scott to be captured by the DE.

BTW....was "Scottie" from the Monopoly game just serendipitous....or a nod to Scott? ;-)

Author's Response: The dog from Monopoly is a Scottie dog, so it's just a coincidence. I know I've said it before, I should reiterate how grateful I am for your reviews over the years. It's great to see people sticking with the story and watching it unfold. Scott is lethal, but he's not unbeatable. If you were surprised that they could capture him, consider how much of Vis Insita's combat scenes he's spent running away!



Reviewer: lazzyboy5540 Signed Date: 2017.07.05 - 05:37PM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

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Awesome chapter, great action!!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.07.05 - 02:18PM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

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Does the chapter title mean anything? Plenty action and I think things are coming to a head. Not sure what happened to Hermione.

Author's Response: As Scott has explained, all known universes are non-deterministic, but the shape makes the space around Harry semi-deterministic. The formula given as the quote is for conditional probability, or determining the probability of A given that B has already occurred. Basically, it's the question of how many missions could they expect to carry off before something went wrong.



Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2017.07.04 - 09:34PM Title: Probabilistic Modelling in Semi-Deterministic Space

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Ack!!! I hate evil cliffies!!!

A well done chapter! Kudos! And don't worry about it taking a while - make sure it's something you like rather than just pounding it out. You'll be happier with the story that way. And so will I. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, I know it's better to hold off updating until I'm happy with it. I just wish I could be happy with it and write faster, that's all. Thank you for reviewing!




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