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Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2017.09.10 - 10:44AM Title: Psi Omega Warden

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Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 04:57PM Title: Psi Omega Warden

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Scott playing mind games is pretty awesome :D Your chapter titles are not getting any more sane though.

Author's Response: I gave one hint previously, with the chapter Erebus Tau Alpha, and then another in the opening quote for this chapter, where the author of the fictional book describes 'Omega Nu Rho'. Both are derived from the KRAF phonetic alphabet. In this case, the acronym is Psi Omega Warden, PoW — Prisoner of War.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2017.09.09 - 12:55PM Title: Psi Omega Warden

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Good chapter. Mr Lovegood dying was a nice touch. I never cared much for him. The comedy in fanfiction note has credence. Who out there is good with comedy though?

Author's Response: Xenophilius was an unfortunate casualty of happenstance. I didn't set out with the intent to off him, but it just turned out that way.



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2017.09.08 - 12:33PM Title: Psi Omega Warden

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The Naked Quidditch Match is easily the funniest HP fanfic out there.

The Thinking Cap: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1087371/1/T he-Thinking-Cap is also a funny one, with 2 or 3 brief sequels.

As for commercial fiction, A Gentleman in Moscow by Amor Towle is my new favorite book and has a sly, subtle humor.

Great action in this chapter....and I always knew there'd have to be a Scott/Hermione partnership at some time....loved it!

Author's Response: The two of them have worked together before, notably in during their intrusion into Hogwarts and their first entry at Grimmauld. Their respective skills are very complementary.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.09.07 - 08:00PM Title: Psi Omega Warden

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Time seems to have past and no rescue force has turned up. Is it just time slows down when you are in a good fight?

Author's Response: The entire chapter is probably about 45 minutes worth of time, to be honest. Maybe even less.




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