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Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2015.12.22 - 04:20AM Title: Chapter 2
You should have had the goblins charge a fee to count the gold.
Author's Response: Nice Idea, shame it didn't cross my mind at the time. But you can say that they are charging the fees behind their backs.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.08.31 - 08:40AM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting chapter.
It doesn't surprise me that Harry managed to outwit Hagrid. Hagrid has a good heart but he is easy to steer in a direction.
It, also, doesn't surprise me that the Dursleys didn't wonder about Harry when he didn't return. But, I wonder if Dumbledore will know that he didn't return to Privet Drive.
Did Hagrid tell Harry how to get on the train?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Whoa! It's nice to have such perceptive readers, though I admit it takes the fun away that you have when explaining your story to someone else. I happen to enjoy it very much and adore those reviewers who ask questions. Ahem, ahem, need to get back on the track.
Well Dumbledore. I think Dumbledore would just assume that Harry has returned to the Dursleys since he has no where else to go. I think setting guards on an eleven year old when danger isn't that high would be a bit stretched even for the wizened Dumbledore.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.08.26 - 06:08AM Title: Chapter 2
Ah well, it is so easy to outwit Hagrid. I am puzzled that no one noticed that Harry didn't return to Surrey.
It's a good idea that Harry checks his Gringotts business more accurately. However, it doesn't suit him well to be so wasteful. I really hope that he stays grounded.
Will we learn a little more about the letters that Harry received at Gringotts?
It would be nice to know what had annoyed Harry so much.
Author's Response: Hagrid is the man we all love and it's because of his innocence. Even when just writing about outwitting him, I feel guilty at what I am doing to such a nice man. I don't think the Dursleys minded that much that Harry didn't return to Dursleys and Dumbledore would assume that since Harry has no where else to go, he would return to Dursley.
Maybe you will learn, Maybe not. I am rewriting it for a reason. Maybe I will add some more details? who knows? Can't give too much away.
Thanks for the review.
