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Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2016.01.09 - 07:38PM Title: Chapter 5

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You surprised me. Was expecting to soon bail when I started the story...I'm still here and enjoying it.

Thanks...



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.12.22 - 07:56AM Title: Chapter 5

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That was an interesting chapter.
It is sad that you killed off Hermione, but you must have a reason for doing this. Can't wait to read about it in future chapters.
I like the strong friendship bond between Harry, Ginny and Luna.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 04:01PM Title: Chapter 5

I know that they didnt get a long but really you had to kill hermione and give then the new deal of death......glad they figure out charlie right away and luna is smart to use her head the way she does.....kutgw

Author's Response: Already answered about Hermione. And I would expect Ginny to be a bit sharp witted than Ron (even in canon.) And luna's well Luna. I am glad that you keep enjoying my work. Thank you.



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.12.16 - 03:11PM Title: Chapter 5

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Don't understand the reason to kill Hermione. Was it to remove the now useless character or you just don't like her? It's like oh well shes dead, QUIDDITCH!! It didn't seem to effect them or anyone else.

Author's Response: And that's what I was waiting for, someone to question why did I do that (Honestly I am expecting a lot of Whys? in this regard). Hermione's death will serve a purpose but not yet and the rest is spoiler. The question is would it affect everyone. An even bigger question, is that what I want to focus on? Showing people grieving about Hermione? No. That's not what I have planned for this story. This story has a different plot line and I believe I have given enough words and efforts to the death of a minor character in this story.




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