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Reviewer: Hippothestrowl Signed Date: 2016.12.31 - 12:22PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Well, a massive routine info dump but I guess it sets the start of the story. Now I have to send a short summary back in time to when I started reading this story with a message telling me not to read it all but to still send back the summary. ;)

Let the real story begin...

- Hip



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.12.20 - 08:56PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

Interesting start



Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2016.06.14 - 05:59PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

Interesting start. I do love Time Travel stories especially if Ginny will be given importance. Looking forward in reading your version

Author's Response: ya, well chapter one is ... honestly I put no real effort into it, as I say in the A/N blah blah harry sent his memories back in time, however thanks for your review



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.08 - 09:34PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Great beginning to this story. I have read a few that started with a similar premise, but unfortunately they did not seem to go anywhere. I hope you continue this story.

Author's Response: Thanks



Reviewer: professormoody Signed Date: 2015.08.18 - 10:30AM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

this started off great, excited to read the rest!

Author's Response: thank you, Prof



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2015.08.17 - 05:30PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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You have intrigued me!!! Can't wait until the next chapters are validated!

Author's Response: thanks, must say i can't wait for the next chapters to get validated as well, not to offer offense to any on our list of beloved archivist /wink wink Barb



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.08.16 - 03:12PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

well thats a fun start to gte harry to go back and fix what he neededs to fix fast and maybe get the world in the right as rain again.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks Ski, being aware of how well read you are, at least on this site, your praise would make me plush, but instead i shall go build something manly



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.08.15 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Interesting start. Like to see where you take it.

Author's Response: thank you,,,honestly where i am going to take it won't be apparent until chp 4, but i hope i manage to make the boring drudge through Grinngott's and meeting up with Remus as painless as possible with a few worthy lines



Reviewer: Harte Signed Date: 2015.08.14 - 03:41PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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I like this. There is enough of a twist to make it interesting and you have a very nice writing style.

Author's Response: thank you,,,i wanted to keep Harry 12, without the pervy older soul, though 12yr old Harry did just sit through 6 months of the newlywed show



Reviewer: dronvire Signed Date: 2015.08.13 - 01:13PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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No Review

Author's Response: no reply but thanks for them there stars partner



Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.08.13 - 01:08PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Good beginning, can't wait to see what you do with it.

Author's Response: thank you, if you liked the first chp i hope you like the next, its the typ, Harry goes to Gringott's but i got a couple lines in there



Reviewer: zeta_one Signed Date: 2015.08.13 - 11:46AM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Nice start. Can't wait for more.

Thanks for sharing

Author's Response: thank you, and sharing is what we do here, otherwise we'd jot this down on college ruled paper and stick it on the closet shelf,,,oh wait



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.08.13 - 09:31AM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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That's a very interesting beginning. Harry's task list is pretty long and contains many exciting projects. I'm really excited to see how it goes on.

Author's Response: thank you, there are some interactions at the burrow i am looking forward to but that will be chptrs away



Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2015.08.12 - 02:48PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Interesting. Good start. Can't wait for more
Tricia

Author's Response: thanks



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.08.12 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Not an unfamiliar plot. Wait and see how it develops.

Author's Response: once argued that after 200,000 years truly original was hard to come by,,,really hard in fan fiction, thanks



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2015.08.12 - 02:18PM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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So Hermione's theory helped, but Harry's Elder Wand knowledge really stopped him from going mental?
I am not quite sure anyone ever woke up from this dream before they laid down, after they were aware Harry was dreaming. Sleep. Sleep. Sleepy.


Author's Response: Nightmares of futures past and erasing the future come to mind, think bobmin summed his as YYATTFF, yes yet another time travel fan fic, just trying to create anohter fun ride for those who liked those



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2015.08.12 - 11:54AM Title: Chapter 1 Sharing

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Interesting start, I look forward to seeing where you go with this :)

Author's Response: thank you




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